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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Goblin King

By : GeminiFaerie
  • From bloodshound on July 18, 2012
    well, now and then filler chappies are needed. And it did impart a lot of needed info... so, how long are you going to let sev and siri splash about in Egyptian rivers before they actually get together? Damn, Siri is fun. Exasperating, but fun. i imagine he'll drive Sev round the bend on a regular basis. ^^
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  • From magentasouth on July 14, 2012
    Shouldn't this be in the crossovers category?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 14, 2012
    Oh I love it!!!!!
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  • From noxlumen on June 21, 2012
    In chapter 23, you have too much bondage. Now, I love a good bit of bondage, but this one defies even the laws of magic. First you have Harry blinded and bound on his back by his spread ankles and wrists. Then Draco tells him to roll over and get on his knees, and he dose, with no spell to cancel the first bindings, and gets bound on his knees. On his knees, the rest makes sense, but the first binding doesn't.

    Also, there are some out of place words during the orgasm.

    Other then that, for the past year, Lucius has been dancing around my head in skin tight velvet pants, knee high boots, and a loose Fabio style peasant shirt singing "Magic Dance" in the great hall, so I'm glad not to be the only one to see the correlation between him and the Goblin King, and have enjoyed reading so far.
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  • From NinjaVampirex3 on June 21, 2012
    I absolutely love your story, it just wouldn't let me sleep until I've read it! It's really really great, so I will await the next update with bated breath! Only one little thing I'd like to point out - brunette is a girl, brunet is a boy. Same goes for blonde/blond. Other than that, this story is bloody fantastic! :)
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on June 21, 2012
    Love the chapter, Love the story, and I'd like more Sev/Siri action. *wink*
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  • From bloodshound on June 20, 2012
    lol, poor harry. "Yes, you are going to rule the world! why? Because we say so, now, hush." :p
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 14, 2012
    Oh Dumbledore you fool! And Minerva! Really!!!!
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  • From bloodshound on June 13, 2012
    lol, siri never changes huh.
    wow, V is really proving his title as sick freak isn't he.
    anywho, dear dumbles is becoming more and more V like. Did he hex Min to warp her mind or is she just so far up his but all she can see is the crap he's spewing?
    How long before V can pick up har's spying through the Har'crux link? Well, at least they're for warned.

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  • From mizzwhip72 on June 10, 2012
    Dumbledore will have to fight Voldemort by himself.
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  • From bloodshound on June 07, 2012
    we'll take wwhat up dates we can get just as long as you continue. pls, pls, pls do continue. this is very interesting and rather a lot of fun. I can't wait til Paddy finds out Sev was lily's bro. that's going to be hilarious.
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