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Reviews for You Will Not Kiss Me

By : Prosperosdaughter
  • From ANON - jthechosen1 on March 04, 2013
    Man this is such an intesne read! I really hope things work ou for Severus, he suffers so much and I want him to finally have some peace! Great work as always!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 03, 2013
    AHHHH! Finally, finally Remus will know the truth! But will they still be kept apart for appearances sake? Hmmmmmm most likely but I hope they will find a way to sometimes see each other. And that Memory Charm on Remus! Eager to hear the story behind that.

    Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 03, 2013
    Is there hope??? Please say there is hope for Remus and Severus! But if he is married to that bratty pushy Tonks?
    Nwxt chapter double fast please. Life has been so unfair to them especially Severus. They need a looonnng conversation & lots of time for intimacy.
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  • From MoriartyWasReal on February 26, 2013
    My heart hurts after reading this and now I have to go read my textbooks to escape the feelings. I was pleasantly surprised to log on and see an update today and I'll be patiently awaiting the next one.

    Your writing is lovely as always, I can practically feel Snape's emotions myself.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 25, 2013
    D: Lupin! Snape! Ah!

    great chapter, as always. You're writing is on point. I can't even imagine how Snape managed to keep his face straight while hearing Remus married Tonks. Interesting thing about the potion... but I don't think Remus would have been in a proper state of mind to think the potion should have tasted differently.

    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 25, 2013
    I skimmed a word here & there until I saw where Tonks married Lupin...sobbing and not very quietly either! It's just waaay too much for me. I read for pleasure...to get away from some serious problems. What Snape is going through is not fair!!!
    I'll check the next chapter. Maybe you'll start going for a happy ending if not, I'll try again later. I can't stand Tonks & what she is willing to do to get her own way.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 13, 2013
    Way too much angst & cruelty for me! Why am I still reading then? I'm not...I'm skimming. Hopefully waiting for something wonderful to happen for/to Remus and Severus. I am so grateful that the armlets haven't fallen off or been felt. Sorry, I don't remember what they are to do when one of them is unfaithful. If that happens I believe I will stop reading & won't even skim. It would just be too too unfair...Severus has made mistakes but has realized them & is trying to fix them, i.e. his very honorable treatment/saving of Narcissa & Draco. I believe Dumbledore had a lot to answer for in trouble, unnecessary pain and unneeded secretiveness! Yes I'm still to far into it but I love Severus/Remus & can't stand Tonks in this story!! At least Dumbledore is dead & can't hurt them any more than he has.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 04, 2013
    I am sooo sad for Severus and Lupin. They never get a break! It breaks my heart. Please tell me their bond won't be broken by that awful Tonks and that Remus won't believe Severus is dumping him and rally has a good reason for everything please huh please!!
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  • From ANON - cLaWs on February 04, 2013
    That was so sad but i still loved it poor poor Severus i cant wait for the update, But i just want to say you have written something beautiful and i hope you no that. I will be sad when this story ends really i will be, but knowing i have gotten the chance to read such a awesome story makes me really happy and I'll probably reread once or twice. (sorry if my typing is a bit blah i think i have stayed up a bit to long >.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 03, 2013
    sigh. Whenever I see this title pop up now, I'm both eager and dreading to see what you put Severus and Remus through. That was a cruel twist: Severus was finally resolved to tell Remus everything and that was the same day he had to kill Dumbledore. I love the addition of the wolf dreams in this chapter. It really showed, in addition to the letters, the evolution of what Remus was feeling. He's going to be so devastated! In his grief, will he reach out to Tonks?

    Eagerly awaiting your next chapter! Great job!!
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  • From MoriartyWasReal on January 31, 2013
    This is my LONG overdue review, I apologise for that. I started this story months ago, ended up having to read it over from the beginning to my last stopping point because my memory has been messed up since an accident I was in. It was just as heart wrenching the second time around, especially when I caught up.

    Every time I read this story I brace for impact because I know it will never fail to pull on my heartstrings.

    I really do enjoy your writing style and the incorporation of the direct quotations.

    Sorry for not reviewing up till now, I've been too busy rushing to the next chapter to leave a review
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 28, 2013
    AHHH! You're still killing me. Those letters Remus writes! :( I know you say to trust you but everything looks so bleak for Remus and Sev! I have a feeling that this is only the beginning and things will get so much worse...

    Great chapter. Your writing is amazing as always. Keep going!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 28, 2013
    I'm in a deep sad sad sad mood for Snape & Lupin! You aren't really going to let them break their bond are you? You couldn't be that cruel to them (or to your faithful reader)...they've been so lonely and betrayed all their lives...unloved by those that should have loved them. What Tonks calls love is a sick thing from losing her boyfriend and won't last under real life when she finds out what Lupin is really like & that he doesn't forget the love of his life so easily. Snape will always be between them.
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  • From ANON - cLaWs on January 20, 2013
    YAY i missed reading your story, but now i have another chapter to read YAYYY SO HAPPY....sorry had two cupcakes today....anyway i loved it even tho it was sooooo sad to see that happen to those two stupid dumassdor those poor dears *sigh* dont wanna say to much because others might not of read the new chapter yet and i dont wanan spoil it even tho i want to howl out my rage etc etc but i loved it all of it and i can't wait for the next update ahh this is ganna kill me.
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  • From ANON - mary blackman on January 18, 2013
    i loved this story if you do an update or sequel lease send me the link to it thank you
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