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Reviews for You Will Not Kiss Me

By : Prosperosdaughter
  • From ANON - Auror21 on August 05, 2012
    I absolutely love your story. I usually come to this website for pure smut/ PWP stories, but this story is not only smutty but has a real heart and such a well thought out plot. I don't know if you've addressed this yet but I'm begging you to not let Snape or Remus die in the end as in cannon. Our heros of this story need a happy ending after so much heartache, and listen to me...I'm emotionally invested in your characters, which really speaks to you as a writer. Hoping for a HEA.
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  • From ANON - JtheChosen1 on August 03, 2012
    Call it crul, but I really wish Severus would beat up Tonks lol. Awesome work!
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  • From ANON - melankali on July 23, 2012
    Well! I read your story all the way through in one sitting. Then I looked at the number of reviews you've gotten and was really saddened by the lack of attention/love you've gotten. So I had to write and let you know that this is really good! Seriously! I've been reading fanfiction since the early days of SycophantHex.com and Severus has always been a quiet obsession. You are writing a good, well written story with great character interpretation and really hot sex...Woot! The fact that you're even mostly keeping to cannon (big picture) is excellent and amazing! Well done! That said, please don't stop. I can't wait to see where this is all going and look forward to the next installment.
    Your new fan,
    melankali
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  • From TalisRuadair on July 23, 2012
    I think I can see where this is going and I really hope that I'm wrong. I would hate to see something as desolate as that occur. Please tell me that you will not be following cannon to the best of your ability. I understand that you have been working within the events so far, but I fear that the end of this fiction will be that Dumbledore refuses to let Snape tell Lupin. Lupin believes that Snape truly betrayed and murdered Dumbledore and decides to let Tonks have her way after the discussion in the hospital wing. The two of them are legally married but now soul bound, which Snape finds out about from the jibes made by the dark lord to the Malfoy's and Bella when the Muggle Studies teacher is being tortured over the table set up in the Drawing Room of Malfoy Manor. Snape will only hang on to make sure his unbreakable vow for Lily is fulfilled. Teddy is conceived and birthed only adding to Snape's agony. The battle comes to Hogwarts after Snape delivers the sword of Gryffindor to Harry, Snape fly's away, meets the dark lord, gets bitten by the snake in the shreaking shack, which already has horrid memories linked to it. He gives his memories to Harry and resigned to die because he no longer has a reason to live. Remus and Tonks both die in the battle and Harry never learns of the love between the two because everyone that knew about it besides Bill will be dead. Hmm, maybe he will find out from Bill. Anyway, I really hope you don't follow that path. Perhaps you could have Remus admit that he doesn't feel the same way about Tonks. Perhaps Snape can actually tell Remus about the deal with Dumbledore, or perhaps Remus could go back to their flat not wanting to believe that things were as they appear. They meet and talk before that summer. Perhaps they both survive the battle of Hogwarts, perhaps Snape carries the antidote to Nagini's venom or Lupin senses his need or Tippy comes to his rescue. Lupin seems to be a much stronger dueler than Jo's cannon version so perhaps he will live. If you do the whole Lupin marries Tonks arch or Teddy is concieved, then she could always still die and have the other two survive leaving Snape and Lupin to raise him before Snape carries their second son.
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  • From ANON - John Pemberton on July 23, 2012
    This is such an intense plot! You're doing an amazing job with weaving both your own ideas and actual literature from the novels. I am curious to see how you adjust the ending of the books to your own writing. Indeed, I was surprised that you still killed off Sirius but alas, it had to be done. I will keep following this story until the very end, I can only hope that Remus and Severus stay together!
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  • From Scioneeris on July 07, 2012
    Oooh, I missed your last updates!! ACK. LOL. You are updating faster than I can keep up and I really hate tracking stuff on ff. *sigh* This was such a heartbreaking chapter (79), I felt SO bad for Severus and I really wished that there was a way to just hold him and reassure him and everything.

    Loved the detail of Severus asking Tippy to make whatever Lupin wanted. That was just sweet to show the comfort between them all.

    I did wonder how you were going to work Dora into the storyline for the whole Remus and Dora bit. Oooh. I really do feel bad for Severus now, even though the chapter title should've warned me, but still, a good chapter and a really good twist, as usual! Great job with this one!
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  • From littleisle on July 06, 2012
    This was wonderful! I don't usually go around FFnet much, but after reading your story, I now realized that had you not transferred it here, I would have never have read it!

    I'm glad your still continuing because I know there is still much that these two have to go through :) Thank you for being a wonderful and consistent writer! I cannot wait to read more of your work.
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  • From GodOfInsanity on July 04, 2012
    I, too, have been reading your story on my phone. That's why I didn't review until now. Which reminds me...ONE...review? Geeze, people on this site are either LAZY or they just don't know a good thing when they read it! This story is amazing and I've read plenty of great HP stories. I've noticed there's plenty of excellent writers writing Harry Potter fanfiction and because of them (including you), we, the readers, get to relive Harry Potter all over again. Especially since HP is over with now.

    But yes, I've read...*thinks* several chapters already and I'm drawn like a moth. You've handled all of the characters with exceptional ease and they've all been perfectly in character in spite of the conditions. I love Snape and Lupin's relationship in this. It's a great dynamic and what's better is it's not perfect or over dramatic. It's just the right amount of drama, humor, and adventure. I love it, and thanks to you, I have MANY more chapters to read. And as I read them, I will review. I'm loyal that way.

    Anywho, bravo, you!
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  • From Scioneeris on June 12, 2012
    I just have to let you know how much I am really enjoying this fic. I hope you continue to post (and WOW, you sure update fast!), but it is wonderful and I have enjoyed every single chapter so far. I've been reading it on my cellphone, which is absolutely lousy for leaving reviews, but as soon as I've the time to spare, I will be reviewing whenever I can. I love the way you keep everything in character, even though it is AU! and I absolutely adore the angsty interactions between Severus and everyone. This has to be the best Severus/Remus I have ever read, that is really so much more with an actual PLOT inside of it. Do keep up the marvelous writing--I cannot wait to see where this is headed next!
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