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Reviews for You Will Not Kiss Me

By : Prosperosdaughter
  • From Peahen on July 21, 2018

    I have searched far and wide for more than 116 chapters of this and 20 of Old Friends.  I love your development of of the relationships and how skillfully you mesh your completely original and interesting background story with the original storyline.  I love your AB~IL story and the pack so much, too.  I am sad that this appears abandoned.  So well done!  However, I can only imagine that perhaps  the deaths of the two tragic lovers in the original work stalls this fiction as you work to avoid it :-)  Well, we all must dream.  Thank you for your time and efforts writing these stories.


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  • From ANON - Megan Moore on June 19, 2016
    Absolution amazing story, one of the best Severus Snapes stories that I have ever read! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you so much for writing this x
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 17, 2014
    I'm reading and still crying and sooo sad that Remus and Severus are suffering and so scared for each other. And then there's that pregnant Tonks who is so bad hanging onto Remus when she knows he doesn't really want her...that rotten Dumbledore. I get so aggravated that my poor Remus/Severus are suffering sooo long!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 29, 2013
    I don't even know how he can stand upright ...poor Severus!!! They are never going to have each other and peace.
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  • From ANON - atty on October 15, 2013
    I had originally found this story last year and decided that I didn't like it after a few chapters, but I decided to give it a second chance and OH MY GOD I am in love with this story! I haven't been able to stop reading it and I'm actually glad now that I waited a whole year to come back to it, I was able to read soooooo many chapters!! And can I just say that this is one of THE BEST fics I've ever read and it's just so captivating and wonderful and I cannot express it in words.
    Please please please keep up the AMAZING work
    And I'm also sorry about your friend.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 16, 2013
    Oh Noooo!!! Not that Dora again!!! PLEAZE do something I don't see how they will survive another go around with her nasty selfish wicked self and I know I won't!!! I may have to skip a few chpts or only read the last paragraph. I can't stand the constant angst she always brings with her. She almost makes me believe in abortion. Severus & Remus are sooo good and they have suffered so much from miserable growing up years & others attitudes until they found each other then Dumbledore....don't even get me started on that EVIL man!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 09, 2013
    This continues to be so sad so tragic!! Yet here I am still reading hoping for a happy ending, respite, Tonks out of the picture?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 17, 2013
    Are Severus and Remus never to have any peace and honor? I can't tell you how sad your letting that horrible Tonks be pregnant and still trying to steal Remus makes me...allowing everyone think she is goody two shoes and Remus is garbage!! No one should have to suffer as much as they have.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 17, 2013
    So now Remus begins to get a taste of what Severus has been enduring all along :/ but at least they have each other now! Eager to see more how Severus acts during the school year. Great chapter! Keep going!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 28, 2013
    So glad Severus has Remus - because if he didn't, what trauma after trauma he would have had endured! Great chapter. Excited to see the beginnings of Severus and Remus' plan to keep Severus' cover while saving Hogwarts.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 28, 2013
    After all this time I can't believe that even with Dumbledore dead (and good riddance) Severance & Remus can't get the peace and contentment they deserve & have earned! Can't there be some people that believe in them and help them for a change?

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  • From ANON - LadyFireCrab on May 27, 2013
    I was so excited to get on and see another chapter today! This has become one of my favorite stories on here, I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 07, 2013
    ooo man. That was a good chapter. i'm surprised that severus wasn't even more apoplectic with rage but i suppose they had a goal so he couldn't be too murderous lol. and i should have seen remus wanting to break the curse coming. excited for the next chapter. great job!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 07, 2013
    There just is no easy answer or peace ever for Severus and Remus! I am soooo glad that at least Sev & Remus are together again and Tonks and her parents have been told off & confronted by what she has done. I want Tonks out of their lives so much.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on April 28, 2013
    Please tell me Tonks is going to get what she deserves.
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