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Reviews for Will you be my daddy?

By : Sasunarufan13
  • From ANON - bcjink on November 20, 2012
    Lol uh, yes you do have a knack for cliff hangers. Holy crap, the sickies and my car being a defective jerk pull me away from the internet for a few days and everything happens! O.o I did have a feeling it could have been one of the creevies in the beginning, but was like nooo, what a nasty way to go, but that bit with the wolf was amazing.Soooo sorry it took me so long to come back and review. (Thankies, I am finally feeling better btw)Those were awesome chapters, and I can't wait for more. Take care!
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  • From bloodshound on November 20, 2012
    "HERO WORSHIP GONE BAD! TRAITOROUS GRYFFINDOR MADMAN RESPONSIBLE FOR POISONINGS. Story at 11." :P
    heh, the creevy's are so easy to villainies. all that misguided hero worship. Still, the little brat managed to take a sizable chunk out of both teddy and har. solid ghost mooney was rather a bolt out of the blue. for a bit there i thought teddy had changed but as a pup he wouldn't be able to do much and would be even easier to hurt.
    well, considering har didn't want the kid in the first place, it'll be interesting to see if he keeps it or not. if he loses it, malfoy will be devastated... and creevy probably up for the Kiss. while it might be malfoys second born, it would be har's first born blood heir and messing with or causing the loss of an old House heir is likely to get the perpetrator roasted over a slow fire. Not to mention malfoy will breathing smoke and snorting fire over damage to his family. yeah, the little a hole is screwed.
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  • From FairyBean on November 20, 2012
    lol, loved that chapter, cannot wait for the next and the Creevy kid is a great choice. Personally (and despite the lack of evidence for it I was sure it would be Lucius lol)

    Cant wait till friday, good job its wednesday now!
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  • From Fjellnord on November 20, 2012
    I thought Harry was completely in character. How many times haven't we seen Harry running out to save someone, not thinking about a single consequence? Great job!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 20, 2012
    No I wouldn't have guessed Dennis Creavey because of his brother. Now who is the wolf!! Poor little Teddy..well at least he knows he is loved. But now there is another child at risk who is truly innocent & of course Harry hmself at risk. Most of all poor Draco who has to take care of all these loose cannons who do before they think of what the effect will be on other people..right Teddy & Harry? Sometimes I think that Harry really does have a hero complex..only he can do what's needed. He just seems to jump into things without looking for alternative safer ways.
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  • From ANON - aww on November 19, 2012
    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    he has teddy give him back give him back *hunts ba*erd down and hacks him up to bits* you got a problem with that? didnt think so give him backkkkkk now *pouts*
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  • From ANON - leahsydney on November 17, 2012
    I normally don't follow Mpreg stories, but this one is actually pretty good. I would just like to comment on your mention that Teddy is a bit OOC. Honestly, since the only thing we know about Teddy is that some time in his late teens, he kisses Ron and Hermione's daughter Victoire, its not really possible to write him OOC. And his reaction to the pregnancy is completely typical for a little boy who has gone through so many changes so quickly. It was a spectacular tantrum. A well written story over all.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2012
    It is Lunas even weirder twin brother isn't it?
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  • From bloodshound on November 16, 2012
    this is what happens when you don't inform your kids that they're in danger too... or make sure they've adjusted to the idea of a new arrival, rather than just assuming they have. Teddy had to bust out some time, he just has the worst possible timing.
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  • From ANON - Claudia on November 16, 2012
    Ohmygod. I knew it was bad when I read 'dark blond man'. You can't just leave us with a cliffhanger like that! Poor Teddy. And I'm still curious who the kidnapper is. I can't wait until thursday. thank you again.
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  • From ANON - Madamdragon on November 16, 2012
    OK in a way but not a bad one I was hopeing for something to happen to Teddy to add to the drama and wish granted. Good update hope you update again soon, cuz I don't think I can wait til tues. :)
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  • From ANON - bcjink on November 15, 2012
    I'm glad you're alright again. I'm still fighting whatever it is I have, so I sympathize with Scorpious wanting snuggles. And I'm probably giggling waaay more than I should about Harry being called mommy, but that was too freaking cute. O:)And of course, gotta love the lemons ;) Take care, looking forward to finding out what's next!
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  • From ANON - aww on November 15, 2012
    awlays so mean to teddy what did he ever do to you? still love the story cant whait for the next update yay :}
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  • From PeriLover on November 14, 2012
    I'll be sorry to see this story end, but am glad of the sequel. It always seems that the good things don't last long. Poor Teddy. I can understand his feelings all too well. And where was Draco when I was younger?? I know he was a prat, but he's 100 times better than the guy I knew. What a toe rag he was. Well, thanks for the story, and keep up the good work!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on November 13, 2012
    i don't think it's going to be long now before explosion Ted, a kid can only handle misery for so long before he vents... even if he has connected with draco since.
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