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Reviews for Harry Potter: Ice and Fire

By : Harry_Lannister
  • From spritaid88 on June 25, 2012
    great story so far please update soon
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  • From MDK95 on June 17, 2012
    Love the chapter grest work and cant wate for chapter 3.
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  • From MDK95 on June 17, 2012
    Great story looking foward to the next bit
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  • From ensoa123 on June 15, 2012
    Thanks for the update!

    That is an interesting take, for Harry to be perceived as the successor to Aerion (even if it's just in a spiritual kind of way-- this one IS a dragon! Hilarious if he ends up with the animagus skill as a dragon). It is quite ironic, if that 'Brightflame' nick sticks, that Aerion the first wanted to be known as 'Brightflame', but was referred to as 'the Monstrous', and Aerion the second is called 'Brightflame' without wanting it so.

    It would be quite interesting if Aerion's son turned out to be the founder of the Peverell House. He could be his grandfather or great-grandfather if it was true.

    I really want to see Harry builds a power-base loyal to him, as he grows up in this life, there should be ways for him to acquire land too, and if he has(or not) acquire more money. And not see him like the Harry on your other story, to be so subordinate towards Cersei.

    On a side note, Aerion seems to have been recorded to have had a Dragon Egg. There's nothing on what happened to it or where it is/was/went, it would be quite cool if it ends up in Harry's hands on a later time. It would be quite the right mess if at mid-game, another 'dance of the dragons' happened too!

    I don't know how you plan to implement magic here, and I'm unsure if it's related with the Targaryen motto 'Blood and Fire', but Valyrian magic was rooted in Blood and Fire, if the westeros wiki is to be believed, it would really build up Harry's case if his style in using magic or at least the ones that are seen are made around that. Along with the 'Brightflame'... but I'm getting ahead of myself.

    As for the lemon, I liked it. You did fine.

    Him not resisting too much also makes sense, with the surprise and his past life coming to front and being in child's body. But I would expect for that not to happen again, at least, not without being a bit older and with some safety measures being taken, I'm assuming venereal deceases exist there, he should be more wary of it, with his modern education(or at least awareness). Bastards is another, doubt he wants children of any kind, I also doubt he wants to build up a persona of sleeping around, like Robert or Tyrion.

    I AM looking forward to your next chapter, I do have to say that this website is quite a pain when waiting for updates, there being no alert function, no idea when there IS an update. I would be grateful if you posted in one that had one, or if you used FFnet to alert your readers, or something. It's a big inconvenience, really.

    yourfanfiction seems to have one
    hpfanficarhive has one too

    That will, of course, NOT stop me from reading your story, though!

    This is one of those stories that get me pumped up when I see an update, I really hope you get to finish it.
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  • From Angeldoctor on June 14, 2012
    the sex scene was good considering he couldn't really cum as he was physically ten years old. Though i suggest u don't add another sex scene until he can because on scene like that is alright but more seem like u're trying to fill in the blanks.
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  • From BoundnHurt on June 11, 2012
    that is a good start. I like it.
    Now, I am trying to figure out what it is crossover'd with. lol. I don't have the slightest clue.
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