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Reviews for Bonded One

By : Stephke23
  • From ANON - SnarryLover91 on March 15, 2014
    This story is an absolute delight to read. This is a favorite ship of mine. I so hope you will update soon for I can't wait to read the next installment in this story. Keep up the wonderful writing.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on October 03, 2013
    I'm liking this story so far so I hope you plan to continue it. The plot line is interesting though I'm not sure that Harry is always in character. I guess that can be explained away but him just trying to survive and you have given him some backbone so it is still believable. I'm cuirous as to how it will all turn out as the future doesn't seem to have Marvolo as Voldemorts lover. So if Harry gets pulled back to the future and all the bad things still happen, will Harry try to seduce Voldemort? Or will Harry change Tom and create a parel universe? Either way, it's a good start to the story so please continue (and not to be rude but maybe also proof-read your chapters or get a beta reader as there are more than a few spelling mistakes).
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  • From ANON - Diana on July 10, 2013
    Please, update soon!
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  • From ladyphoenix117 on July 25, 2012
    This is such a great story, super original. You should keep writing, you have a gift for making the characters seem really believable. I really like this version of Tom, seems like most Tom/Harry fics make Tom a nice guy or just a tiny Voldie. You've found a wonderfully realistic balance of a young man growing into what he will (might?) become. Keep up the good work!
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  • From GlitterGlam on June 27, 2012
    I still wish that Tom will...you know..be a little more gentle with Harry instead of ordering him around..I know he's a dark lord and has his pride but at least he should warm up to his lover instead of treating Harry like one of his minion..well..a minion with a higher rank :D and I think one day he'll grew to regret that..and when that day comes..Harry won't be so fast to forgive him anymore XDDDDDDD ahhhh...the idea of making your lover jealous XD
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  • From GlitterGlam on June 23, 2012
    You got to hurry up and update this!!!!! I can't wait!!!
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  • From bloodshound on June 23, 2012
    hums a few bars of 'don't fence me in', on harry's behalf.
    XP to ff for deleting epic stories for their racy content.
    your tenses are still a little wobbly but better than the first chappie. keep an eye on that neh?
    so, is it love young tom will feel or merely possession.
    Well, I'll be. the tea leaves were right for a change. :P
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  • From vanessaclarke on June 20, 2012
    Wow! Talk about a dramatic opening! This is a really interesting idea and the writing style is nice and fluid in spite of the jumps back and forth, which is no easy feat. So, bravo!

    You've also done a great job of making Tom seem just slightly unhinged. He's intelligent and talented but his moods shift on a dime and his lack of reason is already apparent in the way that he dislikes Harry's fear of him and yet wants him to be intimidated and obedient. Not to mention how he insists on keeping Harry without once considering what that might mean for his future self (never mind the rest of the future). If Harry is supposedly his bonded from the future, said future self might be missing him.

    I might disagree a bit on Harry pulling out the flirty tactic right away like that. I don't know that he would give up on reasoning with Tom quite so quickly. He's probably more likely to flounder around a bit before settling on that tactic. Still, smashing good job! Two enthusiastic thumbs up. ^^ I look forward to seeing more.

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  • From Lunary on June 12, 2012
    Hi,

    guess I'm the first one.

    Uhm I just reviewed the last chapter on ff.net.

    Is it really necessary to switch sites?

    Will you keep the story updated on ff.net or mostly not?

    For the Chapter so this review wouldn't go to waste, I love it.

    Regards
    Lunary
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  • From bloodshound on June 11, 2012
    poor har is sure dumped in t deep end with this one. If V learns to love rather than just possess, will that change history... is har his true bonded one or was that due to the voldi bit in his head?
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