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Reviews for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Kimbovet on January 29, 2013
    Oh you are evil with that cliffie! Look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Solariel89 on January 29, 2013
    OH COME ON!!!!!!!! D8 You HAD to do it, didn't you? :( Please, don't lose anyone.... Please let someone interfere.... You're gonna have me in tears now.... :( It's still a great chapter. I still love you. You haven't lost me. lol
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  • From stray523 on January 25, 2013
    This story is awesome and addictive! Totally not a piece of crap. I check every couple days for updates. Keep it up! oh, and do I see a pairing of Jonah and Serena coming?
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  • From Solariel89 on January 23, 2013
    I almost cried reading them, so it's okay. If you're a wuss, so am I. lol I've been waiting for this all week and finally I got to read it! I'm so glad Zandra's getting straightened out. If anyone deserves to be stronger, it's Zandra. She's such a sweet girl. I also hope Serena can adjust Jonah enough that I don't see him as a selfish prick. That's pretty much my only view on him. He's a selfish, obtuse, prick. So, hopefully he'll redeem himself soon. :)
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  • From demonsangel on January 22, 2013
    I forget who it was, but a friend once told me something their professor told them, forgive me if I do not word it properly but I think you will get the meaning. When you are writing, if you feel the same thing your characters are supposed to feel, cry when they want to cry, are happy when they are, then what you are writing is/will be an amazing piece of work. The gist of it is, wanting to cry while writing that, just proves how well you are doing. I wrote a similar scene for the opening of a story I did, I almost cried, told me friend about it, and that is what they told me.

    Anyways, great chapter! It looks like Jonah and Serena both might be growing up a bit, which is always good, and Zandra is making such great progress. Is she going to get to meet Remus now? I look forward to reading that chapter ^^ How come no one has checked Draco's office before then? Has anyone checked Hermione's? Looking forward to more as always! These stories and chapters really help me get through the boring and stressful days of repetitive chores and caring for my grandmother.
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  • From Kimbovet on January 21, 2013
    Both discussions - Serena with Jonah & Draco with Zandra - were excellent! Poor Draco. I'm so glad Lucius got what he deserved at the end of "Bound." Looking forward to Zandra running with the wolves.
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  • From ANON - MB 3 on January 17, 2013
    I know I haven't reviewed in a month or so. While I have caught errors, I just haven't been in the mood or had the time to write them down and post them. I'd rather just read the stories and enjoy them-small errors and all. Just wanted to let you know that I'm still here, still reading both stories, and still think you are awesome. Also, I'd like to make a prediction. Phillipe and Harmony will eventually both become daywalkers. Because daywalkers have longer lifespans and one twin cannot survive without the other. So it makes sense for both twins to eventually become daywalkers. Can't wait until Monday to read your next update!
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  • From Solariel89 on January 15, 2013
    Amazing, as always! This story just keeps getting better and better. :D I'd love to see Jonah get put in his place. :) That would be a sight to see.
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  • From Kimbovet on January 15, 2013
    So glad that Aiden & Zandra are closer now, as well as Rhap & Deven. Looking forward to Draco's talk with Zandra & hopefully his talk with Jonah. They both definitely need the help. Thanks for the steamy wall sex at the end, too! ;-)
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  • From demonsangel on January 14, 2013
    Yet another great chapter! It's nice to see things developing between the kids and that they seem to be taking steps towards acceptance and what not. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Kimbovet on January 07, 2013
    Welcome back!!! Glad to see updates for both stories today. Loved the very hot scene with Hermione & Draco. UNF! LOL! I now also have a new retort to use in the future thanks to Rhap. "You bet your fucking creepy ass eyeball I would."
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  • From demonsangel on January 07, 2013
    Another great chapter! The fates have a father? o.O I need to brush up on my mythology again, it seems I either missed something, or it has been so long I have forgotten lol. Though...that would have been interesting to see Zues...anyways, interesting twists! Can not wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - musicandbooks96 on December 26, 2012
    once again you amaze me with your writing. i'm always either on the edge of my seat while reading, or bouncing in it waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2012
    absolutely wonderful; as always. I can't wait until you put up the next chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see how this will turn out, that's something I've always enjoyed about your stories they are constantly intriguing me and making me want more and more of them! Keep up the great writing
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  • From Solariel89 on December 19, 2012
    NNNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?!?!?!?! D: TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!

    (Marvelous way to end a shitty day though. :) Your chapters always make me feel so much better.)
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