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By : goldhorse

From MahoganyMarauder on October 25, 2012
Hello goldhorse! I am a huge fan of your work, and I've been following them avidly ever since I started on Bound. I have one request though. Can you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make Draco and Hermione take up a few tips from your awesome foursome (I know that you know who I mean. XD)??? One Last Night was AMAZE-BALLS, and I'd really love to see Draco and Hermione explore like that. :D Please please please?

Love your work! To be honest, I'm a little hesitant to go at Fooling Fate like I did at Bound--I literally just sit in front of my computer ALL DAY because I couldn't get enough--because it's still a WiP. Anyhoo, I'll faithfully wait for your upcoming chapters.

MUCH LOVE,
MahoganyMarauder aka Nina. :3
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From Solariel89 on October 25, 2012
I LOVED the movie quotes!!!! And now I'm heartily ashamed I didn't even come close on guessing.... :/ Shit. Oh well.... Thank you for the amazing chapter. I've had a very bleak week and this was the perfect relief. :)
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From Kimbovet on October 24, 2012
Sweet!!! I like Andra for a female character, short for Andraste, which means invincible in celtic & is the name of the goddess of victory that Boudica invoked during the Briton rebellion from Rome. Hermione & Draco playing crazy & doing random muggle movie quotes was hilarious. I did recognize the majority of them % especially loved the Ghostbuster ones. Poor Phillipe but at least he will get the chance to be with Harmony, even as a vampire. KUTGW
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From ANON - wonkat89 on October 24, 2012
OMG!! Never had guessed it was her hiding her magic all this time. That is awesome! I've been waiting patiently for this chapter and I will do the same for the next chapter too. (Although another chapter of Beyond the pale would help with the wait ;) )

Keep it up! Your writing is nothing short of amazing!!
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From ANON - Josie on October 24, 2012
OMFG...soo wasnt expecting that!!!!! This story is so unbelievably good - I'm completely, totally and utterly hooked. Whenever I see a new chapter I do a wee happy dance :) Keep up the good work xxxxx
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From ANON - Steph on October 24, 2012
I'm still reading this story and I honestly loved it :). I'm so glad that hermione and Draco played it smart and got out of there with some injuries but safely. And there back at the ranch with everyone else and their children. Great job
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From demonsangel on October 24, 2012
Wicked chapter! I loved how Hermione and Draco faked madness...then again, in order to stay sane with such a crazy life and family, you have to be a little mad to begin with...lol either way! It was fun. I loved trying to guess all the quotes. Sadly, I missed most of them but it was still fun. I really hope Philipe doesn't take the turning too harshly. I mean how would he feel if it were Harmony instead of him? And what on earth are they going to do with all those kids o.o; That is going to be a lot of healing/explaining. But I suppose, who better to handle the poor dears then them.

Now, if I read this right, which I am still in a bit of shock and thus doubting my reading ability lol, you are going to let the three of us chose? That is so freaking awesome of you! I'm not really sure what you are going for though as far as a name goes, so I hope this works for you. I was thinking Nahuatl which is Aztec for "four waters." And female. I thought that because it aztec culture has a magical element to it that apealls to me and seems to fit with the HP world. As well as water being a well used magical element and the number 4 as well...and it just...strikes me as a female element *shrugs* The name itself can fit either gender. If you don't like it let me know. Thank you so much hun!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - MB3 on October 19, 2012
I required a while to think on the latest chapter before posting anything. It's funny how much Lucidia89 and I think alike. Almost everything she said in her review is what I was thinking. Including rereading Bound, though I'm not sure if I'll review at the end. But I'll try to review here every once in awhile even once you stop the guessing games.

After giving it much thought, I don't think the Master could have been in England or he would have been in the battle at Hogwarts. If the Master was there, then Cygnus should have been too. So I think that the Master is either from, or resides, in America. It's an interesting thought to have the Master be a girl, but for some reason I keep thinking it is a guy. I don't think it's MacNeely though. He talks, but he doesn't seem to be Master material. As awesome as it would be to have his squib sister actually turn out to be the Master, I just don't think it fits. Wanna know what I'm gonna guess? I'm gonna go with MacNeely's uncle. I originally wanted to say father. That the father was so disappointed in his kids that he uses them as lackeys to keep an eye on the school and has groomed Cygnus for a more important role. But that doesn't quite fit. Uncle fits better. So Cygnus grew up with the uncle and aunt who are married but have no kids. They use their niece and nephew to spy on the school and to keep Whorple in line.
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From Daydreamer on October 18, 2012
Omg, so good. I can't wait for the next chapter. I just wanted to say that I am loving this story. You are such an amazing writer. I hope Draco and Hermione are okay.
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From Bogarto on October 15, 2012
It's chapters like these last few that are the reason I rarely read WIPs! I just get too frustrated waiting to find out what happens. The story has been great up to this point, but now it's to the tense, anxious moments that would push me to keep reading all night long if it was a completed fic (did that during Bound btw).

Great work as always, but this chapter has me waiting more impatiently than usual. The last time Hermione was captured and in danger, Draco blew his cover to stop any harm and then had to obliviate Bella. This time it seems they are determined to not give away their true power, so I keep wondering how much and which types of torture they will "allow" before it gets too much. Then as that is ongoing, how will the kids (Malfoy twins especially) react to their injured and captured parents?? Will any of them snap and do something rash and then put themselves in harms way???

Gah! *grumbles about WIPs*

For the Master I am guessing it will be an OFC that we haven't met yet...someone old.
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From shelagh on October 14, 2012
Dang!!!I love this fic. Keep up the great work. Sorry you didn't get your day off. I know how rough that is. We can be patient for a fic this entertaining. Who is the master?? I have no idea and that makes it even more fun.
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From Kimbovet on October 14, 2012
Glad the others got out & surely Phillipe will recover. I have faith that Hermione & Draco will make it out alive but probably tortured & weak. They always seem to find a way to survive & escape. I still think the Master is probably MacNeely but since you haven't really told is the Master's sex, I wouldn't be surprised if Whorple is revealed to be him. KUTGW!
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From demonsangel on October 13, 2012
That was a very good chapter. Great twist! I can not wait to read more. As for the next guess, I am going to have to say Sanders, the Ancient Runes teacher. After going back through the chapters I made a small list of people to be considered. I thought about Mackneely, but it just doesn't seem likely as he has a squib sister. He just seems like a prick who needs to have a nasty run in with one (or more) of the kids spellwork lol. Anyways, can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2012
Oh my... ever watched a film or a book where you got the end and can't do much but sigh to decompress?? That is how I feel like now. Amazing!!
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From Solariel89 on October 13, 2012
You know... this would be so much more helpful if you would tell us just who is so close.... lol Anyway... sorry work sucks.... But! Since you like toying with us, I suppose I can play your silly little game.... ;) Nice touch with the half brother. :) I'm impressed and disgusted that I didn't think of something so profoundly simple. lol And I'm gonna fangirl for a little bit, simply because this is my favorite set of OC's within a given universe. YOU CAN'T KILL PHILIPPE!!!!!! COME ON!!!!!! TO THINK OF EVEN KILLING ONE OF THEM SHOULD BE CONSIDERED HERESY!!!!!!! *clears throat awkwardly and shuffles feet* ....So.... Back to thinking.... Cygnus Lucian LeStrange-Malfoy.... First thought: GROSS!!!! Bellatrix having a son with Lucius?! Ick. Not all that surprising, but still ick. Not someone I'd want to fuck with.... Anyway.... Second thought: I was right about it having to be someone with access to the cane, wasn't I...? :) Anyway.... Third though: The Master.... DEFINITELY a former Death Eater- or someone with close ties to one.... Especially if Cygnus was raised by him. But, the fact that we've never seen him before makes me think he was either very well hidden in Europe somewhere, or in America.... So... that leads me to think that it's someone close to Lucius, or MacNeeley.... Thing is... I have to finish re-reading Bound to remember if any of the ones still alive are smart enough to pull this off.... (Yes, I'm re-reading it and I'll review it again when I'm done, because I'm just that sad. lol) But, I do have a feeling that MacNeeley- pathetic as he seems- is cunning enough to have an alternate persona he adopts to keep his plans hidden. Thing is, with Melody's sight, she would've seen all of that lurking beneath the surface, wouldn't she...? So, I guess, in a round-a-bout way, I right back to square one, aren't I...?
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