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Reviews for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Whitneyism on October 05, 2012
    I don't know how, or why I think so, but I think it's Ron.
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  • From ANON - MB 3 on October 05, 2012
    I've several things to say, so I apologize if this gets a wee bit lengthy. First off, I've been stalking your page since halfway through Bound. I love your stories and have read them all. But since my account was deleted here from non-use, I just haven't been much of a reviewer. I couldn't resist participating in your guessing game though. Before I guess, in chapter 4, is Knott supposed to be Nott? Because they all have a "k" first. I just want to make sure that I'm not missing any of my old Death Eaters.

    As to my guess, I just can't seem to decide. Lucius would be too easy. I also don't remember any of the other old Death Eaters being still alive and not in Azkaban. I think the rest were taken care of in the raid on the classrooms. A possessed Narcissa would be fun but not very likely as Dimitri is watching over her. As suspect as MacNeely is, I'm actually leaning more towards Sanders. So, if I had to give one guess, I'm gonna have to go with Sanders-the mean teacher you don't want to cross.
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  • From shelagh on October 03, 2012
    Squeee a new chapter! Thank you!!!
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  • From ANON - musicandbooks96 on October 03, 2012
    i would say its lucious, but thats too obvious and draco would recognize the voice immediately. can't just say its "the master" that too general. has to be someone at the last battle to get the cane. has to be an old death eater. Nott?
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  • From Kimbovet on October 03, 2012
    Thanks for adding the scene & additional info in the previous chapter. That helped a lot. So far so good for the group going thru Khrone's castle. Hopefully everyone in the group makes it out alive. As far as to who the Master is, you appear to be leading us to think it is Lucius Malfoy returned from the grave but I've been leaning toward him being MacNeeley in disguise. *Shrugs* Guess we'll see next chapter.
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  • From ANON - PsychoticPenguin on October 03, 2012
    Oh you evil, evil person! How can you leave us hanging with that!? Totally loving this story, and your others as well. You've definitely become my favorite fanfiction writer. Please keep up the good work, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters.
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  • From Solariel89 on October 03, 2012
    GAH!!!!! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO US?!?!?! *weeps uncontrollably* It's absolutely fabulous, though. :D And that damned poem is creepy as shit.... The only person I can think of right now is Lucius... but he's dead... isn't he...? The guy's carrying his cane, though.... But, if it's not him... it'd have to be someone who had access to the cane and I can't think of anyone else.... But, Lucius is dead, isn't he...?
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  • From ANON - k.orchid on October 03, 2012
    Oh thank you, thank you for updating this amazing story! I've almost fell victim of reading chpt 21 before I read that note and I had to thank you for the changes you made.
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  • From ANON - Stephy on October 03, 2012
    I can't believe you left at a cliff hanger:(. I really hope they all survive and can go back to their children... I don't want any of them to die in this buliding.
    I have come to love all your new characters:)
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  • From ANON - demonicangel on October 03, 2012
    Duh dun duh is it Lucius?

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  • From demonsangel on October 03, 2012
    Well, even though I reviewed the last chapter before it was changed, I shall do so again as I have more to add. I opened a notepad to record what possible mistakes I noticed so I shall just copy and paste. So, to start with:
    Chapter 21
    Ugh, Hagrid in a bikini *shudders* What a terrifying and yet funny thought lol. That position Draco put Hermione in, is it so that her back is exposed or her stomach? Because I found as a kid I could curl up like that and rest on my neck and shoulders with my knees pressed to the floor, but if its so her stomach is exposed then dang she has a flixible spine o.O

    "Everyone started chanting the now familiar until magic" word missing here I think

    "Alex smiled.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2012
    Finish this story!! PLEASE!!
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  • From Sami_C on October 03, 2012
    Fabulous as always. I was sad to see the cliffhanger but it will just make the next installment that much better. I believe that somehow Lucius has survived.

    The only error I caught is in 21. During the bonding you said Draco and Harmony are on the outside of the circle with Sev and Celeste.
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  • From ANON - Goldhorse fan on October 03, 2012
    Loved the new chappies. I think the new villain is Lucius. That reference in the Healer Bracken chap has to amount to something after all. Keep up the good work. On a grammatical note they crossed a moat which is a body of water around a castle. A mote is a speck like a piece of dust.
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  • From ANON - musicandbooks96 on October 02, 2012
    i love this story! i was lucky enough that the first fanfic i read was your Harry/Ginny off shoot of Bound. By the time i got there you had finished writing it! i was/am so happy that it was the first one i read! when i saw that you had started this one i was literally jumping up and down in joy. :-D I've been wait on pins and needles for each and every chapter. i get a bad feeling about this next chapter..... please don't let anyone die so soon in the story..... When is Ms. Toad Jr (Whorple) gonna end up in Circe? (i don't know if i spelled that right...) or better, dead?
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