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Reviews for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Stephy1992 on October 02, 2012
    I have started reading the sequel and I already loved it. But I really can't keep up with all the new couple and who should be paired up with. Can anyone give me a list of who will be with who. Thank you:)
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  • From shelagh on September 28, 2012
    Ahh the ravening hoard has been appeased with another chapter from our valliant author. LOVED IT!!!! Thank you for updating. Mmuuwwaahh
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  • From ANON - SilverStorm on September 28, 2012
    I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one. Please update soon :)
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  • From Kimbovet on September 26, 2012
    Glad you're back & hope you get to feeling better soon. Liked the quidditch tryouts & look forward to Khrone's castle. While I liked this chapter in general & it moved the story along, there seemed to be some things missing & not enough hints to flesh out everything, especially in the beginning. The last chapter left us just before Melody & Alex bonded & this chapter startd right after they bonded. I really hope you give us a one-shot covering the bonding & right after. Then after the hot Hermione/Draco scene in the transfigured tent, you mentioned something about a prank involving screaming that woke Hermione but you didn't really explain what that was all about or even who did it. The end also felt a bit rushed. Please, don't feel you need to rush chapters thru just for us. We will wait, sometimes impatiently, but we won't leave you. You are a great storyteller. P.S.: While waiting for this update, I've been re-reading "Bound" & still thoroughy enjoy that story.
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  • From ANON - Random Reader on September 26, 2012
    So I apologize for not reviewing sooner. I have been reading your stories for over a year starting with Bound and am now realizing that I can review without an aff account.

    But I must say, I love your stories. It is so well written that I wish that it was actually published in book form. I would love to just keep a hard copy to read whenever I want. Can't wait to see what happens next and will be stalking the site for updates.
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  • From ANON - Saphirephoenix on September 26, 2012
    Ahhh, another chapter. My sympathies: stomach flu isn't fun. I forgive you for a week of waiting for updates and having to run to the solace of my bellydancing drills.

    There is nothing like some cut-throat Quidditch to liven up a day at school. I was very happy to see this. Well done, milady!
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  • From DemonicAngel on September 26, 2012
    *claps hands in excitement* another wonderful chapter! sorry to hear your under the weather :(. get better soon :)
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  • From Solariel89 on September 26, 2012
    THAT LAST SENTENCE BETTER NOT BE FORESHADOWING!!!!! 8O I DON'T THINK MY HEART COULD TAKE IT!!!!!

    ...Okay, now that that's done... The new chapter is amazing!!!!! I'm sorry you got sick.... Please feel better soon. And take your time on the new chapter for Beyond the Pale. As much as we want the new chapters, we don't want you to strain yourself. Okay? :)
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  • From demonsangel on September 26, 2012
    *pulls you up and puts you right back in bed* None of that now missy! You got the chapter out and that is all that matters. Well, that and you feeling better of course. If anything, we should be at your feet begging you to continue. As for the chapter, amazing as always! I did find it confusing though that we were tossed right from they are getting bonded, to after bonding. That threw me for a loop and I thought I missed a chapter. Also, when Melody was explaining what people were and what they were called, right after Draco and Hermione were mentioned she said "We call." and then it went right into a different paragraph. Can't wait for more or the update on your other story!
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  • From shadowenfire on September 26, 2012
    I must say I love this story and I fangirl squeal every time I see an update. I don't review much because I always read from my phone at work but I just had to say I love it. Every Chapter.
    All the complexities and subplots work very well together not to mention when I'm reading it doesn't read like a "fanfic" it reads like a novel.
    Please keep writing and updating, I'm really looking forward to what happens.
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  • From shelagh on September 25, 2012
    Where oh where has the next chapter gone? Oh where oh where can it be? LOL hurry up please some of us are having withdrawls....
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  • From ANON - Saphirephoenix on September 23, 2012
    So many individuals can't see scars as beautiful, I love that you make them that way. I personnaly see scars as a proof of life (I should know; I have one from a motorcycle accident that looks like a werewolf gave me a love bite on my derriere!). I loved the healing ritual in Bound and I adore that you used it here.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2012
    nother chapter! And an interesting one too =) loved the fight and the healing scenes, oh how I would love to see those scars! They sound so cool the way you describe them! Cannot wait to read the rest of this story it has such an interesting story line that it is almost ruining me for any others!
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  • From Kimbovet on September 18, 2012
    Thanks for the shoutout. I think you are a great writer & I thoroughly enjoy everything you've written so far. Now for this story, I'm thinking I may have an inkling as to who the Master may be. I guess we'll see if I'm on the right track as yo continue the story. :-) Bring on Melody & Alex's bonding! Also, thank you for the listing of the children & their mates. That helps a lot. KUTGW!!!
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  • From ANON - SMC on September 18, 2012
    As usual this chapter was wonderful. I'm so excited that Alex and Melody are finally having the ritual. I look forward to each new chapter you post for all of your stories. You ate an amazing author, thank you for sharing your ideas with all of us.
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