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Reviews for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

By : goldhorse
  • From Kimbovet on August 10, 2012
    Love the story & congrats on graduating!!! You know, as long as you don't use the dark elements just for shock value & you give us a light at the end of the tunnel, there is nothing wrong with dark & disturbing in a story.
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  • From ANON - Lucidia89 on August 10, 2012
    Fabulous! As always... ;D Even in the slower, gushier parts you know how to keep us riveted. :) And no matter how dark this gets, I promise I will push through. (I'll only shut one eye. lol)
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  • From demonsangel on August 10, 2012
    Oh for fucks sake. The damn word verifier is screwing me up. Ok, attempt number three.

    Loved the chapter, it was great as usual! And congrats!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2012
    You updated! Love the chapter and the fact that the kidsh have a band going, very awesome. Poor James and his lack of a soul mate; and what's this about Albus's soulmate dying!? And a huge congrats on finishing your intership and your class! I can't wait to get to that point myself. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - misty on August 09, 2012
    It's my birthday and thank you for my wonderful birthday present!!! Congrats on being a graduate as well! Great job doing so many things at once! Keep it coming. If it's too dark. . . well you're the one that wrote Melody's new favorite saying. *smirk*
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  • From ANON - misty on August 07, 2012
    I don't think it's too drawn out. But one of the things I liked most about "Bound" was the interspersing of humor. I think this one is much darker (as it's supposed to be) but I think the kids would adapt better if there is still some levity between them and their parents. But that's just me. And as I hope you can see from the reviews I've been leaving I'm reading both at the same time!!! I can't imagine the work that you are putting into this and they are both amazing! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2012
    Every chapter I seem to love this story more and more! That poor poor girl, what happened to her was absolutely terrible! I hope they are going to be able to get the boys out soon along with the others who are in khrone's castle. Looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Lucidia89 on August 07, 2012
    It's not too drawn out, but the suspense is building so much, I almost can't handle it! lol I'm glad Zandra's handling it well. You have a VERY well thought out story. I'm jealous. Mine never turn out this great. You are an amazing writer. :)
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  • From Kimbovet on August 06, 2012
    Poor Zandra & poor Aiden. Hopefully, she'll get her revenge on her past captors soon. The pacing seems fine right now. You're keeping the story moving while filling us in on these new characters background. As long as you don't let the story get bogged down in minutia & you give us the occasional lemon ;-), there shouldn't be any complaints.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2012
    Have fun at your last week of your intership! Hope it went well for you. And I cannot wait until you put up the next chapter I always can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - misty on August 02, 2012
    OMGoddess. I love the way you've really made the kids into perfect blends of their parents. This is the first thing I check every morning to see if you've got anything new up. Good Luck with the last week of interning!!!
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  • From ANON - Lucidia89 on August 02, 2012
    Amazing! As always, you have me on the edge of my seat. :) I can't wait to see them infiltrate the school. What a wonderful coup that's going to turn out to be! :D I'm all excited now! Don't let Aiden go too crazy on everybody. They meant well. At least he won't have to be separated from her anymore. And are the kids going to have to bond with their mates before they finally beat "The Master"...? Because the indication I got from the conversation with Nemesis, they won't have much time before they have to fight.... They're not all going to be of age by then are they...?
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  • From ANON - Lucidia89 on August 02, 2012
    Words cannot express.... O.O You have me on the edge of my seat! Every time I read your new chapters I am completely riveted. Don't put the family through too much hell. I'm not sure they could take it. :/
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  • From ANON - misty on August 01, 2012
    You are amazing. I'm serious. You should be writing for your own profit. I love what you are doing with someone else's characters. I would love to see what you would do with your own.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2012
    Made my night that you posted! I love this story to peices and I look forward to each new chapter! Usually I hate reading in progress stories but you update so quickly that it hardly gets to me at all. Fabulous job
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