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Reviews for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

By : goldhorse
  • From Kimbovet on July 30, 2012
    Wow! This story is going to have more layers than an onion. But I like it. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Lucidia89 on July 30, 2012
    Oh, thank goodness! I was just going to tell you I was having trouble keeping track of the kids! lol And I would have reviewed the last few chapters, but I've been quite busy with my own writing projects and my unfortunate trips back to reality. Anyway, I absolutely love the turns you're making! This is so dark and gripping I can't NOT read it! It's too perfect to pass up! Do please write more soon. It's so wonderful and you really help me with my writer's block! xD
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  • From Kimbovet on July 29, 2012
    Great & action-packed chapter as usual. Whorple is such an idiot. I hope she gets what's coming to her, preferably delivered by Melody. Anywho, thanks for the list of children & hopefully for a future list with the children & their respective mates. KUTGW
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  • From ANON - DemonicAngel09 on July 29, 2012
    More More Please! you have me right on the edge of my seat, please keep up the fantastic plot :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2012
    Love love love your stories but I have a favor to ask of you, would you include a list of the children's pairs and their backgrounds in the next chapter? I'm getting a bit lost with all of the names going around. Thanks and your story truly is wonderful, I look forward to ech new chapter
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  • From ANON - Raye on July 26, 2012
    I love both Fooling Fate and Bound. I waited a while for you to start writing Fooling Fate. Because of that time lapse, could you write out a brief family tree detailing relationship and mates (mainly for all the children- there are so many of them!). THANK YOU! Can't wait to read the next chapter :)
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on July 23, 2012
    Poor Lily, This is great, I like that it is darker than Bound it fits with everything going on, it is fantastic and I feel like I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next
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  • From shelagh on July 23, 2012
    Love this series. I read Bound in one marathon session. Now I'm hooked on this one. Keep up the great work. Love it!!!
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  • From Kimbovet on July 23, 2012
    Poor little Lily getting dragged into this. Now to see who her mate is & what you have n your devious mind to save them. ;-) I don't feel it's too dark; just right IMHO.
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  • From ANON - misty on July 23, 2012
    Not too dark. Just dark enough. I mean they've already defeated Moldy Shorts (good one by the way) so the next threat would necessarily have to be harder. Keep it coming!! I'm so glad I didn't find "Bound" until it was already done 'cause I don't think I would have lived through the anticipation!
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  • From Kimbovet on July 21, 2012
    Glad Bracken got what was coming to him. Boy the Fates are really playing around with the children & their mates. Looking forward to the vampire lesson. :-) KUTGW!
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on July 20, 2012
    fantastic chapter. I like the integration of the children. poor Severus they were pretty hard on him...excited to read more I am completely entranced once again by your story
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  • From ANON - Lucidia89 on July 18, 2012
    I absolutely love your stories! This one is so incredible! When I'm stuck in my stories, I just read yours and they help me think. Thank you. I love the turn this one is taking. But please don't be too hard on Narcissa.... I have a feeling she's going to be in for one hell of a shock.... :( And I really hope they can help Zandra. It's so sad that she's Aiden's mate and he never gave her a second thought.... It'd be so devastating if they couldn't save her and he was left alone.... :(
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2012
    This is absolutely incredible! Chapter 2 was incredibly disturbing, but I love how dark you made this. It's amazing. :) Updating twice a week would be amazing, but please don't over work yourself. :) Honestly, between this and Bound, you've gotten me through so many cases of writer's block. Thank you for writing this.
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  • From Kimbovet on July 16, 2012
    OK, the Narcissa twist was unexpected. This story gets better & better (& darker) as it goes on. Twice a week posts wouls be nice...but only if you can manage it. No need to put pressure on yourself.
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