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Reviews for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

By : goldhorse
  • From demonsangel on August 13, 2013
    Well to be fair, that was a good cliff XD Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope things get easier for you! Honestly, I am starting to feel really bad for some of your bad guys lol

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  • From Bogarto on August 13, 2013
    I haven't reviewed in a while but have enjoyed the plot progress and the kids' development. The past few chapters (this one especially) have been slightly bittersweet because it feels like it will end soon...which reading the climax will be great, but will also mean the end of the story which is sad. :(

    For some reason when the gods started entering the picture, I never considered that they would become directly involved in the fight. Figuring that the pures should be the most powerful beings in the world made it feel like they shouldn't have too big of a problem in the end. With gods involved though, that could get tricky...and then the fear comes that they could die to save the world....................please don't kill them!!! *begs pathetically*
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  • From Solariel89 on August 03, 2013
    I had to read it twice because I was so tired. lol But if I was wide awake, I would've been just fine. lol And Bound was very different, but it didn't suck! It was still a fabulous piece of writing! As are all of your stories!
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  • From ANON - Bri on July 31, 2013
    I have a question. Sanders was one of the Masters men but now it's changed to Stephens???
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  • From demonsangel on July 29, 2013
    Great chapter, can't wait to read more. I started re-reading Bound and then got distracted lol. I like how it seems the new walkers are joining in, maybe this will give them a greater sense of family and acceptance? I am also curious about that vampire. Maybe he will be useful. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From sarahkay502 on July 29, 2013
    Again you have provided an AWESOME and BRILLIANT chapter!!!
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  • From Kimbovet on July 29, 2013
    Ready for the real battle to start. The Master & all her minions need to be put down & as painfully as possible! Yes, your writing has improved over time but Bound was still well-written & one of my favorites of all time.
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  • From Solariel89 on July 23, 2013
    *high pitched squealing and trampling footsteps* I LOVE IT!!!!! GIVE ME MORE! *tackle* You HAVE to show this meeting. SOON! This is going to be so great!!!!! I can't wait for the final showdown!!!!! You have to make Moira's death brutal and bloody! And extremely painful.... It's only fair... I do wish you great luck in finishing your original novel. I can't finish any of my stories to save my life.... :/
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  • From demonsangel on July 22, 2013
    Well that was a roundabout chapter if I ever read one lol. Great job though! Glad your girl likes the books! I swear its a sign of intelligence lol
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  • From Kimbovet on July 22, 2013
    Loved the Princess Bride reference! Another great chappie! How about I invite your muse out to eat at the local Chinese buffet? That should keep her fed. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Spirit on July 21, 2013
    I really love this story. It's brilliant. When I read Bound and Fooling Fate, I feel like they're an extension of JK Rowling's own works. The story is detailed and well written, it flows like water in a stream or slow moving river. It's slow enough to read with ease but it doesn't drag like some stories I've read. You've managed to keep me interested and intrigued right from the start of Bound which is something only really good authors can accomplish. Well done. I look forward to reading future chapters. Keep up the fantastically, amazingly, brilliant work! :)
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  • From Kimbovet on July 19, 2013
    Loved the new chapter & like Eldin the horrible elf mime! Update when you can. There's no rush.
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  • From GuiltyPleasures on July 19, 2013
    I LOVED Bound and when I saw that there was a sequel, I was over the moon! You are a fantastic writer and have caused me more than a few tears (both happy and sad). I've gotten to Chapter 50, and I cannot wait for more! I've also read several of your other stories. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on July 17, 2013
    AMAZING!!! I've ead each of your stories at least three times each....Can not get enough of them....thank you so much for writing them....
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  • From Solariel89 on July 17, 2013
    Short, but still worth the wait. I hope we see Elden again. I like him. :) It'd be nice to meet his brother. I hope they find him....
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