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Reviews for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Kimbovet on March 12, 2013
    Another great chapter! Those bastards got what they deserved & hopefully the Master gets hers too! The Gods got some 'splaining to do. :-)
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  • From Bogarto on March 12, 2013
    It almost feels wrong reading about them torturing others since it is so out of character. Though it doesn't take more than thinking about the previous few chapters to feel right about it.

    Looking forward to reading how the gods will play in to things going forward. Also looking forward to the eventual confrontation with the Master. I hope you have a sickeningly painful end planned for her!
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  • From demonsangel on March 12, 2013
    Geeze woman! You just kept throwing twist after twist in that one didn't you? I kind of feel bad for Michael o.O I mean, if they had been siblings he would have had more of a choice in things, but being their son pretty much took all that away. Anyways, great chapter as always. Can't wait to see more, especially about what the goddesses will have to say.
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  • From Solariel89 on March 07, 2013
    Please tell me we get to sit in on this torture session...?! And did I presume correctly...? Are James and Annabel going to be similar to Draco and Hermione...? Or am I way off the mark on this one...?
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  • From ANON - kit on March 05, 2013
    Another amazing chapter! To all there stories. I was wondering would you mind if I used your idea of the two of them being linked in the mind I have an idea for a storybut I don't wanna use something you came up with without asking please let me know.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on March 04, 2013
    Poor James, Annabel, & Nuahtl. Wonder if the souls changing colors means they are bonded phenoms now? Bring on the revenge! BTW you mentioned Celeste several times when I think you meant Cadence.
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  • From ANON - Josie on March 04, 2013
    Another fab action packed chapter! :) I'm a bit confused though...how did Celeste get there? I thought it was Annabel and Cadence that went with Draco & Hermione..suddenly Celeste was there....I'll need to re-read it...not a hardship...love this story

    Keep up the good work

    Josie xx
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  • From demonsangel on March 04, 2013
    Great chapter! Glad they were able to get the kids back. Can't wait to find out what their souls color changing means.
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  • From Solariel89 on February 26, 2013
    Yes!!!!! Muse can suck it sometimes, they deserve to stay. :D I do so hope they level the place. There's nothing but evil in that castle.... They better be okay though. Even if you have to tie Muse to a desk and duck tape her mouth shut. I love it though. It helped me wake up this morning. Thank you. :)
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  • From demonsangel on February 26, 2013
    What a creative way to keep them around! Brilliant! I can not wait to see what Draco and Hermione do once they are at the castle. Hopefully they will tie that blonde pricks dick in a knot. Like a pretzel! And make him sterile. I'm sure they know a spell for that, and wouldn't it tick him off when he found out?
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  • From ANON - Bogarto on February 25, 2013
    Damn, you had me in tears for the first quarter of the chapter...then hoping they'd be saved outright...then to being happy that they'd be saved at least in some form...then to anticipation for next week! Too many emotions for one chapter!!

    That's probably why I usually enjoy the chapters following the tragic ones the most. I don't like that tragedy had to strike, but there are so many emotions and such great character development in the aftermath. I really have grown to like Rhapsody more and more as the story has progressed. Her pain was heartbreaking to read and you wrote it well. I never felt that we saw too much into Albus' psyche before this. Yet with the flashbacks and few moments from this chapter really made me feel even worse anticipating that he was going to die. Just getting that bit more development for him was all it took. That's another reason I wish this story could just keep going on and on. You have introduced so many characters with great potential that you could write hundreds of chapters developing them. I think your loyal following would keep reading with great anticipation if you did!

    I must say that ever since early in Bound when we learned that Dramione could be the most powerful wizard/witch ever, I always wanted them to unleash a bit of hell. My narcissistic side wants them to let their powers be known by all so they can be praised as much as they deserve...even though that obviously goes against your plot, and would eventually lead to a world of difficulty. Still, no one but the bad guys should be at Khrone's, so I'm really hoping that we see some fury and massive power from our favorite couple.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on February 25, 2013
    I see Mother Nature didn't blow you away. :-). The use of the Phoenix's was brilliant! Thanks for saving them from your Muse.
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  • From ANON - Miss Winter on February 22, 2013
    I saw this story the other day but obviously saw it was a sequel, so as expected I went to the first story and decided to read it. The last thing I expected was to be utterly enthralled by the story; I read it in a couple of days and immediately moved to this one. My enjoyment of this great writing hasn't waned in the slightest and I very much look forwards to finishing reading this one.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on February 19, 2013
    A great battle & the kids did well! I'm happy that Narcissa is going to turn so she can live a long life with Dimitri & Addie Mae. Poor Harry & Ginny. Please Muse don't let us lose anybody else.
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  • From Solariel89 on February 19, 2013
    :( Muse sucks. Maybe we'll get to see what happens to James and Nahuatl...? I hope they're okay.... And as shitty it is to lose them, the chapters were still amazing. :) *hugs because you need it*
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