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Reviews for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Goldhorsefan on February 19, 2013
    Not happy at all with what is going on with Albus and James. You have ruined Harry's life. He will never forgive the all seeing twins for this. Parents react with great anger and grief over a loss of a child. It is the most psychologically damaging of all loss. He will blame them for Albus's death, himself, and Ginny for Albus's death. His entire relationship with Hermione will be ruined. They all broke the most sacred trust a parent can place on someone, the trust that their children will be protected. I just don't understand why Harry and his family have been targeted like this (Lily almost died already). Rhap does have Albus's blood on her hands. At least Harry knew what he was doing when he had to face Voldemort. She didn't even give Albus a choice. I really don't get all the crap to save Philippe, and there is nothing for Albus? It seems to me that the twins are just making things better for themselves, and that is abusing their powers to effect their own fate. Not fair. This whole entire thing doesn't make any sense unless Albus gets to come back too.
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  • From demonsangel on February 18, 2013
    Wow, yet another brilliant fight. Great job hun. Why did Sev and Celeste fly though? Wouldn't have been faster if they ran around the outer edge given their speed? Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Ailish on February 14, 2013
    While this chapter did almost make me cry (I too loved little Albus), this was a wonderful chapter that needed to happen. Rhap was right, Albus was one of the only ones that would not have a greater impact on everyone. Muses might be cruel at times, but I think yours will give you a happy ending when she is ready. Good luck and I can't wit for the battle for the ranch.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on February 14, 2013
    Nooooooo!!! I was afraid Albus was going to be one of them & I'm sorry about Martin. Please Muse don't take James too.
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  • From Solariel89 on February 14, 2013
    Do please punch Muse in the face... and the genitalia. Muse sucks. I was crying when I read this! Stupid Muse!!!!!

    And yes, that does help. Tremendously. :) I deliberately read this first. Thank you.
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  • From demonsangel on February 13, 2013
    That was a sad chapter. But at the same time I am kind of glad Martin died. Making him live knowing Albus was dead and his feelings were returned would have been cruel. Good job on the fight though. Can't wait to read the next one.
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  • From ANON - Josie on February 13, 2013
    OMG...my heart is racing...poor Al & Martin :-(
    The chapter was amazing...dont put yourself down! You have an incredible talent and very few people would be able to weave a story like this. I'm on this site every day anxiously awaiting the next chapters of your stories and when they come they dont disappoint.

    Keep up the good work :-) xxxxx
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  • From ANON - Cat on February 13, 2013
    This is a love hate chapter. Love that things are progressing, hate that theyre going the way they are. Don't kill your muse or you'll end up with an unfinished story, though maybe beg for some help to keep the family strong.
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  • From ANON - Bogarto on February 11, 2013
    Darn that fickle muse! I've resisted starting your other WIPs since I hate waiting so much (rather read a story all at once, but once I had finished Bound and you mentioned a sequal there was no way to stay away), but if FF isn't updated I usually check BtP to see if you mentioned it there. I love FF so much that I don't tend to hate Mondays as much expecting a new chapter will be ready when I get home! I think I would honestly be happy if you continued writing this "version" within the HP universe forever...you do have plenty of offspring to write about and pure Dramione could live til 1000 or so I'd think! I will wait patiently for however long your muse holds you back. Whether I hold out until they are complete or not, I will definitely read your others as well!
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  • From Solariel89 on February 05, 2013
    NO!!!!! There's GOT to be some other way! There HAS to be! :( (On a side note- once I stop crying in fear- this was an excellent chapter.)
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on February 04, 2013
    Another great chapter despite the cliffie but I dread finding out who doesn't make it. :-(
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  • From demonsangel on February 04, 2013
    Wow, that was a chaotic and somewhat confusing chapter o.O Great job though. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 30, 2013
    I dont want them to lose anyone :( lol its such a sad thought. cant wait for more
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  • From demonsangel on January 29, 2013
    *hands over more bruise paste* Honestly woman, you are going to deplete my stores! lol Great chapter. I'm afraid to see which children we lose though, that is going to be sad! But I still can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Josie on January 29, 2013
    NOOOOOOOOOOOO...what a place to leave it! cliffie or what! trying to think now who doesnt have a mate...James & Albus thats all I can think of at the moment.

    Other than that...an amazing chapter cant wait for the next...keep up the good work :) xxx
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