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Reviews for Weave a Circle Round Him Thrice

By : SRaven_Underhill
  • From ANON - VestalHarlot on December 01, 2012
    This is very good. Good writing, good characterization, pretty good plot. I will enjoy reading more in the future.
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on November 18, 2012
    This is a VERY Promising story line.

    I always check out LV/HG stories, they have such great potentional for seduction and other naughtyness!!!

    I have one comment..."More, Please"!!!!!
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on August 02, 2012
    Please update sooner. i like this story very much and would like to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2012
    :)
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  • From serpentinred on July 14, 2012
    A very promising start for a story. I will leave a longer review once I get more time to go back and reread the first chapter, but for now, I just want to say: Keep up the good work and can't wait to see what you have in store for us. :)
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  • From Mekom on July 02, 2012
    You are doing a great job with your fic. It is hard to believe that this is your first fic.

    Hermione definitely has a reason to be fearful. It is never a good idea to be a part of Lord Voldemort's plots. I am impressed she hasn't gone insane yet. With a mind like hers, it would be torture to not be able to occupy her mind.
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  • From Nerys on June 21, 2012
    Very promising start. I look forward to see where you're going to take this. I like your portrayal of Hermione and Voldemort a lot so far.

    I do think the usage of "my dear" by Voldemort at that point and in front of all his followers was a bit off (especially without there being a reaction to it by others, be that derisive laughter aimed at Hermione or uncomfortable shock of him addressing a Muggle-born like that), but that's just me nitpicking and don't worry too much about it. I've made similar errors in my stories (I still have a "baby" to delete somewhere in mine). They're not that big a deal and easy to fix if one wants to.

    I absolutely liked the rest of your chapter. It's a relief to see appropriate grammar and spelling. It's also a relief to see a Hermione who uses her brain and isn't an immediate mess when confronted with LV. I liked the pacing you took with this; their reactions to each other were not rushed and seemed logical given the circumstances.

    Anyway, I look forward to reading more. Thank you for writing,

    xx Nerys
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