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From Morbid_and_Sexy on July 23, 2012
These six chapters are kinda cool. Oh! I wanted to take Harry's place in a few places there. lol. Great job!
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From ANON - ChaosLady on July 23, 2012
That was hotter than hell! I can't wait for Remus!
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From Lady_Arachne on July 19, 2012
*grins* I am liking this Harry! A dominating bottom! xDD

Love it!!
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From ANON - bill560682 on July 17, 2012
now as far as my review conserning the room of requirements and harry having sex with his parents or at least he and lily there was a former headmaster that was a member of the house of black which would mean he was also likely a teacher and deputy headmaster so would have had a great deal of time to study the room and the magic that makes it work. so there is nothing that says he did not build his own room of requirements at the black family home.
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From ANON - Joey88 on July 17, 2012
Really am enjoying the story

Like your thinking of doing Harry/Fleur/Bill

I like it more when Harry is in control but that's just me. I would like for Harry to take Tonks forcebly if that is possible

Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully you'll reward us for our loyalty and release another this week ;)
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From ANON - Bybytte on July 17, 2012
Awesome chapter ! I can't help but be impressed by the speed with which you write and update your story. I really do enjoy reading it. I also am very impatient to read Snape/Harry. It's too bad that Sirius is dead, as Sirius/Snape would have been lovely too. As for parings, I don't have any I don't want to see other than maybe Harry/Dumbledore... I'm afraid that would probably scar me for life lol.

bisouxxx
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From Tesgura on July 16, 2012
Loved the note at the end almost as much as the story itself (note, I still prefer the story). And I adored how Harry 'chose to react' for Ron. Absolutely hysterical! I love the M/M and even your M/F is great, Ginny's scene had me dying in laughter, and your portrayal of Hermione was spot on how I would imagine her, even under some kind of lust-spell. I can't wait for more!
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From ANON - bill560682 on July 16, 2012
i have no idea why people seem to want to stick harry with people old enough to be harry's parents. if that is really what you all want then why not just have harry use the room of requirements so that he could have sex with the real thing as in have it create copies of his parents for him to have sex with.

as far as sex acts and toys go bondage with ropes or handcuffs would be nice as well as double ended dildos for the girl on girl action an as far as girl on girl go how about gabby/fliur or susan/hanna or tonk's/fliur. an since tonk's can change her looks how about her making herself look like harry and have 2 harry's in on the fun or even harry and tonk's alone while she looks like harry thereby making it harry on harry.
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From ANON - Hannah on July 16, 2012
The story just gets better and better! I love it! Are you going to end up having Harry release them or is it a permanent thing? And is he ever going to find out what the book is?

This story is the highlight of my day when it's uploaded.
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From ANON - bill560682 on July 16, 2012
as far as pairings go i like harry/tonks harry/susan harry/susan/hanna harry/fluir harry/fluir/gabby an as far as guys harry/collin/dennis. an yes you can mix those pairings up any way you want such as harry/gabby/dennis since those would be the youngest 2 with harry or harry/tonks/fliur those being the oldest females with harry.

as to how fliur and gabby end up at harry's fliur's father could get death threats against his family, an since fliur is going to england already she is talked into taking gabby along.

tonk's could end up being given the task of being harry's personal bodyguard since she can change her looks no one would know it was her guarding him.

as far as the creevey brothers go they could get their home attacked by deatheaters but not be at home at the time so their family is safe but now have no place to live. an the creevey brothers would need little to no spell to be willing to have sex with harry.

as far as susan goes you could have her aunt join the order of the fried chicken and she gets dragged along to the meeting and stuck with the other kids during the meeting.
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From ANON - ChaosLady on July 16, 2012
First-I enjoyed this chapter. Although, it was a surprise to find that Ginny is a budding Dominatrix, it made it better. Second- I don't threaten, I promise. Considering that the pairings and kinks I mentioned in my last review would be a such a turn off- that I would simply stop reading your story because... I don't flame. I always try for constructive criticism because I would want YOU to do the same for ME, considering I am the author of a few fanfics myself (just not on this site). I just found the thought of a Harry/Fenrir pairing distasteful and Remus put on a leash does not fit in with his character, considering that he hates his wolf. When I read another readers review concerning those pairings I had such strong feelings on the subject, that I panicked and wrote that ill-thought out review. If I had known you had such a contrary personality, I would have used reverse psychology on you. ^_-
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From ANON - Ronslady23 on July 16, 2012
Wonderful, wonderful story! I loved how in-charge Harry is about his actions and his fearless sexuality. I also liked how Harry really wanted to enjoy Ron and please him and the warm looks they shared afterwards. It just shows how the inheritance didn't change the love he has for his friends. I love it and keep up the wonderful work! And kudos for telling those picky and pushy reviewers off!

And since everyone is throwing ideas in the hat, golden trio play is always awesome! :D
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From ANON - Sara on July 16, 2012
Wow, that was totally hot. Might need to cool myself off ;)

Since Kingsley is on the menu already I shan't suggest him. I'll throw in Luna as I think she'll have a lot of fun lol.

I did see someone suggest seeing a doggy!Remus on his knees etc. Can I second that? There's something both hot and oddly cute about that :)
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From ANON - Sara on July 16, 2012
Great chapter, Harry's a quick mover ;) I wonder who sent Harry the book originally?
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From ANON - Andrea Readwolf on July 14, 2012
Interesting-- Porn With Plot? Possibly. I do wonder if Harry has been "infected" by the book, or if perhaps it's a creature-inheritence come into being. Seems similiar to an incubus, feeding off desire and sexual release...and yet, Harry seems to have an overwhelming amount of control over others. One of my personal likes in impregnation fics, so I wonder what reprecussions his abilities and new outlook might have on the dwindling wizarding population. Even if the heightened sexual awareness only turns others to their potential partners and not towards Harry, I could see lots of pregnancies in the next year! Which leads to the potential question of m-pregs....

**Personal Theory** If wizards can naturally become pregnant, then the wizarding world would have no real qualms about homosexuality. If wizards can become pregnant via use of an invented charm or potion, then the wizarding world might still habour some lingering resentment and taboo of unnaturalness surrounding homosexuality. If wizarding pregnancies are almost-impossible/unheard of or impossible, then the wizarding world would be quite prejudice against homosexuality as it prevents the bloodlines from continuing on to the next generation.

Then I wonder about Harry. If it is a creature inheritance, what is his grouping called? Circle doesn't sound right, even though it's fun to make spoof off of Harry's "inner circle"... Pod... nesting... pack... Doesn't quite sound right either, but then neither does "harem". And the question--will Harry shag whoever takes his fancy but only keep a select few, allowing the others to go off into their normally scheduled lives? Would those in his "inner circle" being engaged to others within the circle, allowing a smoke-screen of "normalacy" into their lives?

Either way, you've allowed for a whole cast slew of possible pairings/partnerships! May I request you not forget Shack in the remaining summer holiday? Oh, and NO ELDER Weasleys! Please, please, please! You can throw in every other Weasley except Arthur or Molly with Harry, and I'd be fine. Really don't like it when someone tries to throw those two in with Harry--which, for me, is actually pretty strange, because I can read pretty much every other pairing. [thinks] Well, with the exception of Umbitch and Fudge with Harry. [shivers]

~AR
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