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Reviews for Unspoken Desires

By : Lumos
  • From ANON - Ash on December 21, 2014
    I love this story and I've check back every year after a month from your last update. I've yet to see another story with even remote similarities to your plot line. I was just wondering if you intended to update the story at all?
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  • From ANON - Sara on February 24, 2014
    I miss this fic, any chance of an update one day?
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  • From Genuka on June 16, 2013
    This is clearly a well thought out story. i look forward to watching it grow.
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  • From ANON - Sara on June 14, 2013
    I really miss this fic, it was one of my favourites :)
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  • From ANON - Sarah on May 31, 2013
    I am really enjoying this story, it is brilliant to see Severus in a caring capacity. I like how you are developing the characters. I can't wait for more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Gabi_P_M on December 06, 2012
    Please continue, I'm really curious to know the rest!
    xoxo
    Gabi
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  • From ANON - star on August 28, 2012
    You know, I think Lucius as a Healer isn't too far fetched when one thinks about it. He does have the attitude of some of them. :D
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  • From ANON - treana on August 27, 2012
    Lucius as a healer. Lol. But anyway, I always like me to have a little Lucius in a story, so I'm down with him being there. I'm very glad this story is back. It's very cute and I love the set up. Seriously can't wait for those lemons. ;) Severus needs to get some, even if the circumstances are a little suspect. I hope Remus grows to love him. Anyway, will definitely keep an eye out for that update. ^^
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  • From ANON - Lumos on August 26, 2012
    Format? As in font? Or style of writing? Because I think it sounds pretty much like the other chaps.
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  • From savannah19742001 on August 26, 2012
    Great chapter really love a sub Remus. Only one thing I have to complain about is the format for chapter three makes it hard to read. Otherwise I can't wait for more...
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 26, 2012
    Great chapter, is it wrong that the last part kinda made me laugh? I totally wasn't expecting Lucius Malfoy to turn up. Great to see this updated and I hope everything is OK in RL :)
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 19, 2012
    Please please please please update? Pretty please?
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  • From Lumos on July 11, 2012
    I wanted Severus to appear as someone Remus could trust to be stronger, dominant, and more expierienced. And Remus is much shyer and smaller than Severus, which I think helps in the whole dynamic of the relationship.
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 11, 2012
    Great summary, I'm pleased you said when this is set as I was trying to figure it out myself and not having much success. I love the little teasers that summary has given too, very excited now :)
    Just out of curiousity, why the age difference between Snape and Lupin?
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  • From savannah19742001 on July 09, 2012
    Well, thank you clearing some things up, I had figured that all of that would come out in the story later. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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