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By : Yonne91
  • From SpeckyClarke on January 29, 2017

    Good story so far, please inform me of updates.


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  • From ANON - Trebores1 on August 17, 2015
    Hope you continue the story.
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  • From ANON - LadyXandra on September 05, 2014
    Absolutely brilliant! I love this and can't wait to see where it goes!
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  • From devilsmomma on January 15, 2013
    great story so far can't wait for more. please notify me of updates at onecent1960@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on November 03, 2012
    now as far as my earlier post about molly getting put in her place i think it would fit in great if it happened over christmas break. as soon as everyone gets to sirius house for christmas molly tries to open her big mouth and tell harry and granger how things will be run over the holiday and sirius gives her a swift slap down by reminding her that this is NOT her home and that he is a lord and she but a commoner. now this last bit does not sound that big a deal but remember in the old days lords were in fact total masters of thier land and everyone on it. so if a lord wanted to put a commoner to death he could without anyone caring. an of course once she stamps of in a huff her husband also in a rare show of backbone puts his foot down as well reminding her that he is the head of this family not her. an as far as ron goes the only real reason he came to the house over the break was to watch his mother make granger and potters holiday suck by working them to death every day so they are too tired for anything else but thanks to sirius and his father those plans are up in smoke now. so now ron is stuck doing all the work his mother had planned for granger and potter and stuck sleeping in a room alone since granger and potter decided to rub his mothers nose in it by taking a room together.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on November 01, 2012
    now personally i think someone should tell molly to go fuck off and find her own business. this is NOT her house she and the order are guests and should remember that. also harry nor granger are her children so what they do is none of her business. from what you say harry and granger are both 15 so that puts it right before 5th year so sirius is still alive and thereby it is his house. so i would love to see a big row between sirius and molly were she gets put in her place.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2012
    Quite good! Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Emily on July 04, 2012
    Great story. I hope u continue it. If u do cud u mention the size of harrys Dick :P? Above 8 possibly :)
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  • From ANON - hello_gal on July 04, 2012
    I really liked this chapter and I haven't seen this one yet so I can't wait to read more.

    One thing i noticed at the end of the chapter you had 'bunch line' and I think you meant 'punch line' and 'he's' should be 'his'. Since you are editing i thought I'd point that out!

    Can't wait for the next chapters! :)
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