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Reviews for Closer

By : Nocturne
  • From ANON - SarahWhitman on July 24, 2012
    I'm not as big a fan of this chapter as I hoped I'd be. I'm hurt for Draco and I feel as though Hermione should have given herself time to discuss things with her husband, newly joined as they are, before agreeing to such a mission.
    And I hope they reconcile and have some "time to acquaint themselves" before their mission--who knows what kind of awful could happen after that!
    Please continue posting,
    SW
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  • From CafeAuLait on July 24, 2012
    Interesting first few chapters. I wonder what Tom is up to, and does it have anything with him getting his delicious looks back?
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  • From ANON - SarahWhitman on July 23, 2012
    You are truly evil for leaving it like that. Just sayin'!
    SW
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  • From ANON - colao on July 22, 2012
    what fun!
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  • From ANON - colao on July 20, 2012
    enjoying this thoroughly
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2012
    Holy crap! I love your story so far! It's funny and witty! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - colao on July 19, 2012
    ha! vomitting in a vase is great seduction. enjoying it all so far...

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  • From ANON - SarahWhitman on July 14, 2012
    I think there may be be hope for them yet. :)
    SW
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  • From ANON - Amelia on July 13, 2012
    Great second chapter with unexpected yet delightfully simple, non-sexual plot. Keep going, I can't wait to see how both characters adjust to their currently fake marriage. Let the slow burning desire begin! :)
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  • From ANON - Amelia on July 12, 2012
    I love this story so far! The story has an excellent premise- it's got all the things that make marriage law docs so popular but with a bit of a twist so it's original. Something I really dislike in dramione is when hermione and Draco are occ. I see it a lot unfortunately, but I was so happy reading this because I think you've written perfect characterisation for both characters. Please continue!!! Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Alkeni on July 11, 2012
    I liked this chapter. A lot. Well written, intriguing.
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  • From Trelweny on July 11, 2012
    A "light didn't win" alliance marriage? Intriguing. I hope Hermione uses more of her brains than her temper. She tends to get farther that way and learn truths quicker.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - SarahWhitman on July 10, 2012
    I am so intrigued by this story! Please continue!
    SW
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  • From HeartStar on July 10, 2012
    lol intriging more please.
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  • From bananasforyou on July 10, 2012
    Oh wow, please don't end it like that! You make me want to pull my hair out, I need more!! :)
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