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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2012
    I should just give up looking to see if you update this every day, right? sigh...
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  • From ANON - Maggie on November 15, 2012
    I guess this is abandoned, so sad, loved it :(
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  • From Majest on November 02, 2012
    hey i love this story can you please hurry and update. i think you should hurry up and get sereverus and hermione together it is so obvious she is his mate. And I would definitely love for aubrey to get her powers back soon. Just think her with her full heiress powers the malfoy manor would be in a uproar when harry is there and even when he is not. Pure evil and definitely delicious. hahahahahah i love it lol
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  • From ANON - Nyouko on October 18, 2012
    LOVE the story. Can't wait tell the next chapter and when Snape find out who his new mate is. Who is going to find out first Snape or Hermione? Or does Hermione aready now because that would be so cool and that will show alot about her joking with him. When is Ron going to get really really hurt? Even tho I like Ron in the books I still thought he needed to hit by either Hermione or Harry a couple times.
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  • From moodysavage on October 10, 2012
    suuuuuure it is Hermione... Snape is just imagining things lol

    love that little twist with Hermione teasing Severus to freak him out :)
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on October 10, 2012
    Lol poor Snape she is going to drive him crazy!
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  • From demonsangel on October 10, 2012
    Great chapter! And what did dumbles do to that bed? I remember in one story a curse that caused horrific nightmares that should kill you...wonder if it was similar. Stupid old man, I hope you get what is coming to you! Also, I am confused, shouldn't Luna be an elf also? She is Draco's cousin after all. Looking forward to more as always!
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  • From demonsangel on October 09, 2012
    Lol poor Tom. Change is a hard, scary thing. Be careful though, don't want your mate throwing things at you again! Poor Harry, that had to be like a moment out of the twilight zone when they all bowed at his feet XD
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  • From demonsangel on October 08, 2012
    Also, I forgot to answer your question in my last review. I think the story is moving at a slower pace, but in this particular story I understand why and have no problem with it. There is a lot to cover as it does not fully follow the actual story line. Quite frankly, I think it is moving along nicely and I love it ^^
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  • From Jan on October 05, 2012
    LOL, poor Harry, but the bright side is that he gets to be the same age as Draco soon ^_~ Please update chapter 56 soon.
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  • From moodysavage on October 05, 2012
    I just love Harry and Draco together. They are still themselves but their interactions are just so sweet. Draco waiting outside Harry's door all night, carrying him in to a room full of people even if Harry's might be embarrassed... I love how each person's personality doesn't overwhelm the other. They accept each other as they are but they are both willing to change because they want the other to be happy. Sweet sweet sweet!
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  • From moodysavage on October 05, 2012
    I just love Harry and Draco together. They are still themselves but their interactions are just so sweet. Draco waiting outside Harry's door all night, carrying him in to a room full of people even if Harry's might be embarrassed... I love how each person's personality doesn't overwhelm the other. They accept each other as they are but they are both willing to change because they want the other to be happy. Sweet sweet sweet!12,183
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  • From demonsangel on October 05, 2012
    First off, you marked the last chapter as 23 instead of 53 >.>

    Second, great chapter! I love how Harry took charge and even gave them a reason as to why they shouldn't torture people. "You are no better then them" is a much better and workable reason then "because I told you so." Gives you something to reflect on instead of wanting to grumble. I am glad that Lucius took the time to talk to Draco like that, I think they both need it.

    Aw Sev, is someone's protectiveness showing through?
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  • From moodysavage on October 03, 2012
    I loved loved loved Harry's present to Draco! It was sooooo sweet!!!! I just want to bounce around the room and fangirl squeal for awhile! lol
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  • From demonsangel on October 03, 2012
    *squeels* Thank you! I just love this story to death and can't get enough of it. Thank you for posting another chapter ^^ Ah Pansy, never can keep your mouth shut can you? And Sev, are you starting to develop feelings towards a certain new elf hmm? lol
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