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  • From ANON - Rainbow12004 on July 18, 2012
    love it
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  • From Mizuchan24 on July 18, 2012
    I love this story. I love the plot and it makes me laugh how Severus and Sirius argue and give Tom a headache with it all. It made me happy that Sirius and Remus are together, it's one of my favorite couples. I can't wait to see how Harry and Draco end up together and if they will have children. I also want to see the plan that Tom and trhe First Warriors came up with to give Harry the leadership. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 17, 2012
    Be careful Tom and Dumbledore. Harry is a wild card.
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  • From ANON - Maria on July 17, 2012
    You really weren't kidding when you said the whole story... I love it, even though I do think it's a bit slow. I'm hoping next chappie will really start the story then? Don't get me wrong, it's nicely written, it's just a bit too long a intro.
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  • From jami_lee on July 17, 2012
    Love this story!!! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 17, 2012
    Severus should have grabbed harry and ran. But I can understand. His mate is there dead. He can never get her forgiveness.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 17, 2012
    Lily is Severus' mate? Oh that's soooo sad!!! Poor Severus. And after what he just did... it's going to leave lasting scars.
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  • From ladilyndi on July 16, 2012
    Wow, interesting story, I look forward to updates. Keep up the good work and thank for sharing.
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  • From djaddict on July 16, 2012
    This is a very interesting start. I can't wait to see where you take it.

    One nitpicky thing. I believe the term you want to be using instead of in-term is interim.
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  • From savannah19742001 on July 16, 2012
    Wow, great start. I loved your classification of elves. Thank you for a brilliant chapter.
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