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By : Riahana
  • From Lillyrose on April 11, 2017

    Please continue this story it's so good I wish to see what happens between Harry Draco sev and monie and Tom an arbry .


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  • From ANON - on July 14, 2016

    It's a shame that you never continued with this story. Probably one of the better ones out there and certainly a fantastical plot line. Please continue it I come back and reread it every so often in hopes I've added a chapter. 

    Thanks SDL


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  • From NonServium on April 17, 2014
    -=whined loudly=- I just found your story and sat through to read all 59 chapters of it at once. Please keep writing! I'll Beta for you! Really I will!!! I'm in love with your story and writing. Please please pleeeease come back soon!
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  • From blackicekitten98 on March 14, 2014
    Looking forward to more chapters. :) It is an easy story to get hooked on.
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  • From ANON - Sparky on December 31, 2013
    I love this story!! Please, please, PLEASE write more soon!

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  • From ANON - daithi on November 26, 2013
    I love this story, it's not to often you get a well written Harry/Draco story with the Elven ancestry. I can't believe I'm already caught up to the last chapter. This story stays similiar to the original but differs enough that it is intriguing. I like how Tom is a good guy but still has bad guy issues. I really like the Hermoine/Severus pairing as well does Snape good for someone to deal back to him some of what he gave his students. Hopefully next chter will be up soon.
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  • From ANON - daithi on November 26, 2013
    Great story, took a bit to flip things around with Tom being the good guy hehe. I really feel bad for both Tom and Snape knowing that they both lost their mates. But am really loving the elven twist to the story.

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  • From erospandora on September 27, 2013
    enjoy so far ^^

    ~eros
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  • From Mizuchan24 on August 08, 2013
    Oh my god, I was so happy when you updated this that I went back and read the whole story again that is why this review is so late. It made me excited to read it again since its been months that I've been looking for this update and I couldn't believe that you would abandon this story since if you did I would just cry because I just love it so much. I can't believe how cute Hermione and Severus are as a couple and I hope there will be more moments and interactions that leads up to them being together. I also hope they have a child or two because it would be too adorable to see Severus as a daddy. Also I hope there is more interactions and moments between Tom and Aubrey as I can't wait to see how this pairing comes to get together, which I also hope we can see them have a child too as I want to see Tom as a daddy and Aubrey is so awesome as a grandmother and mother, she needs to be one again but with Tom. I also hope Draco and Harry have a child too, since their relationship is so adorable and cute that a child would only make it better. I just love this plot and where it is going that I can't wait for another update. I can't wait also to see which side or if any does Neville and Luna stand, also who Harry has on his side when he goes to defeat Dumbledore. Also can't wait to see what Harry looks like as a Elf and Remus's and Sirius's child when they are born. So Please update soon. Thank you for writing such a great and wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 19, 2013
    Read "the whole story" (haha little play on words there stupid I know) over 3 days. It was great after the 1st chapter or two which was kind of confusing and dry. I am so looking forward to more chapters!! Love reading about the elves getting ready to put Dumbledore in his place once and for all. What a switch up on what I normally read in stories...Voldie is good (or better anyway, and going to work at being better) and Dumbledore will be shown for the manipulating power hungry wizard he is.
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  • From Jan on July 19, 2013
    Lol, love this story. Please update chapter 59 soon.
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  • From ANON - niamh on March 21, 2013
    is there anyway you could send out email notifications when a new chapter is posted? This story is far too good for me not to keep up with it properly!!
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  • From NekoKoi on March 14, 2013
    I LOVE YOUR STORY!!
    It's really good!
    can't wait for the next chapter ^-^
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  • From ANON - love on February 06, 2013
    Absolutely love this story and everyone in it!! Anxious to read more
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  • From ANON - nyks on December 28, 2012
    I hope you haven't abandoned this fic as I would love to read more of it. I come back again and again waiting for the next chapter... I do hope you'll continue writing this.
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