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Reviews for The Terror of Ending Forever

By : TibbytheWitchy
  • From Hancock23 on June 27, 2017

    Damn! I wish there was more of this story.


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  • From ANON - Lin on June 10, 2013
    O.o
    ...
    BWAHAHAHAHAhahahahaha!!!!

    Oh, dear lord-y. You have got to love Severus and his perfect timing. Love the story so far cannot wait for more!!
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  • From Avid on March 27, 2013
    Awwww cliff hanger I can't wait to see their reaction to the baby!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 14, 2013
    I'm glad I just found chapters 1 - 10. I would have gone crazy with Draco in prison, pregnant then giving birth all the time being horribly beaten!! At least I could know he was being saved then the baby was a boy & now Sev is bringing him home. But what about all these people that caused Harry & Draco's situation. He missed Draco's pregnancy & birth, Dtaco's pain & suffering, Harry's supposed relationship with Ginny & with the rest of the Weasles. What about that boy James? If not his then whose & what are they all doing now that Harry knows?

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  • From Bickymonster on March 14, 2013
    Glad to see you updating this story again. :)
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  • From djaddict on March 14, 2013
    You're back! Yeah!

    And YAHOO!!!! Found the baby!
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  • From ANON - Diana on March 13, 2013
    Update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter...
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  • From shibana on September 24, 2012
    I hope they find the baby! :( can't wait to find out
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  • From cocobyrd87 on September 21, 2012
    Yay, an update! Oh please let the baby be there!! Great chapter, Harry should have done more than Obliviate that woman! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - MissLesley on September 20, 2012
    I have found this story to be very interesting. However, it does seem a bit rushed - I have always had questions like why didn't Snape go after Harry after Draco was in prison? I understand why the Order has gone through the trouble of trying to break up Harry/Draco but when the outside ppl find out that Harry is claiming him, they seem to not care. I would give a damn if the most powerful man alive was after the man I was currently hurting.

    Why has Harry not gone to the papers to ask for help looking for his child or at the very least hiring tons of private detectives, or better yet telling the Minister of Magic that if he and his cronies don't get their puts in gear and find his child, he will destroy them politically, socially and financially. HE should know the plan since it started with the Order. Someone had to be coordinating it.

    The other thing I notice is that you haven't really incorporated magic into the story where it would be better. Like Draco's physical therapy. Surely there but be pain potions are spells to help, Draco through, they have spells to regrow bones surely there is something for this.

    And finally when Harry questions people he just takes their word for it. The Nurse says she does remember the man name and gives them some form of a name and Harry then erases her members. But really shouldn't Harry have turned her over to Snape to rip through her memories, to see the exact conversation. Maybe they will recognize the man, the place. Maybe he said something in passing that was a clue. Or maybe she was lying and just got away. What about a truth potion.
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  • From Shigueru21 on September 20, 2012
    I love this story. I look forward to what happens next
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  • From ANON - lali812 on August 22, 2012
    This is such a sad and interesting story. I'm glad they were able to rescue Draco from the Azkaban hell-hole- now to find the baby and exact revenge. I hope that all involved in what happened to Harry and Draco pay dearly. Looking forward to the next update. As for the baby, I actually imagined it to be a boy with the name Scorpius. Perseus is also good too.
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  • From shibana on August 15, 2012
    I had so much reading this story! I hope you update soon :)
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  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on August 14, 2012
    I love this story so much!

    Could you please have Harry and Draco's new born baby a boy?

    Cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Azyuriel on August 07, 2012
    I absolutely LOVE this story! It's extremely well written, and I can easily see the characters as you've portrayed them!

    As far as name suggestions go - Azalea for a girl, Aidan for a boy ^^
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