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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From Kimbovet on November 20, 2012
    Welcome back!!! So glad Hermione admitted being a vampire to Ginny. That will give her another friend to help her. I love Melody & her wicked humor!
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on November 19, 2012
    As loathe as I am to single out just one of your stories- I think that this one is my favorite. That doesn't mean you can stop on the other ones, though!
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  • From demonsangel on November 19, 2012
    *falls over laughing* Very nice! What a perfect "punishment" XD Can someone spell Pansy and Ron together? That would be positively hilarious. And give Lavender a reason to fawn over him for being stuck to that "horrible person" o.O Hmm...anyways, great chapter! Looking forward to more!
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  • From deathraven on November 11, 2012
    did i hear mention of an update??? YESS PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - Chastity on November 09, 2012
    Omg it is so good please update
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  • From ANON - Krystal on November 03, 2012
    I cannot help but laugh every time the naked factor becomes inconsequential to everyone in the "family". It highlights the dramatic difference in Hermione's new life, and is an endless source of levity for me because each time I think of poor Harry's face if he were to somehow walk in on them during one of those close coven moments.

    I loved the discussion Hermione and Draco had about using "dirty" words. I happen to agree with him. His new rule will make a huge difference in the way Hermione thinks that he views her I'd bet. It was a short, poignant conversation, especially important after what happened between them earlier.

    I love seeing Sirius being punished like this, and that Dumbledore is so complicit with everything. He is really sneaky sometimes. Derik was a fabulous addition to this chapter. I cannot wait for Ron to ask questions about him and for Ginny to be let in the loop.

    This story is so wonderful. One of my favorites. Thanks for writing.
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  • From Kimbovet on November 03, 2012
    The opening punishment scene was HOT!!! I'm really glad that Hermione & Draco are growing in their relaionship. Nancy, & maybe Alex, gaining magic was a surprise. Looking forward to more in a few weeks.
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  • From ANON - Track45 on November 03, 2012
    Aw. I love the ending of this chapter. It's so sweet. Please update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - SillyGreenEyes on November 03, 2012
    You are doing amazing as always!!! I'll be missing your stories for the next few weeks! And I think you know we ALL enjoyed Hermione's punishment :p
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  • From ANON - Night Owl on November 03, 2012
    Yes yes yes FINALLY!! :D I love this fic, btw, and seeing this last little almost-confrontation was wonderful. Great job pulling things together and with that deliciously steamy scene at the beginning. I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Saphire Phoenix on November 03, 2012
    Thank you! Thank you so much for not leaving us to languish for two whole weeks without following through with the cliffie sex from your last chapter! *Whew* (Hand over slowing heart...)

    Nice chapter...braided silk-excellent touch. I am also loving that powder that is forcing Sirius to take some responsibility for his past actions. I never cared much for bullies and it did bother me a bit that he never apologized to Professor Snape for almost killing him or to Remus for that matter for using his nature against a boy from their year! Remus is such a good guy; I don't think that I would have forgiven him so easily-even after twelve years in Azkaban. But then again, I am a vindictive wench.

    Enjoy your time off, milady. But please, please, PLEASE do not forget about us, your loyal readers.
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  • From demonsangel on November 03, 2012
    Such a good chapter. I love the twist with Alex and Nancy. Interesting punishment, made even worse by the fact that the others were having fun and she could see them lol. What exactly does Sirius have to do anyways? Apologize? Can't wait to read more, see you when you come back to us!
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  • From ANON - Alice..x/Foreva2000 on November 03, 2012
    Ah I'm happy fr Sev and Melody :')

    That punishment...Oh wow, I'll be retreading that a few more times, that's for sure! It was epic, I loved it :D can't wait for the next installments, till the next time, ya at for now! :-)

    P.S. can you see the email addresses we add to the reviews?
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  • From Dragonfire on November 02, 2012
    Sorry I haven't reviewed for awhile, I got caught up reading Bound :D Such great writing, Please Please Please don't keep us in suspense for too long lol x
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  • From ANON - Alice..x Foreva2000 on October 31, 2012
    Omg that was epic....You can't leave it there! Omg Goldhorse, some of lack. In patience when it comes to this sorta thing! Just when it was getting exciting as well XD I feel the need to go back and beta these chapters for you as there were quite a few mistakes but the tale was too intrieging to matter to be honest. Anyway, as always, I loved typist, this story so far is amazing and I ant read the next installments - which I very much ole isn't too far from now! -) - ta ta for now.


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