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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From deathraven on September 15, 2012
    UPDATE UPDATE PLLLLLLEASE!!! im itchin for the next chapter!!
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  • From DB1 on September 14, 2012
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    Omg so hot!!!! Panting with happiness right now. Update another delicious chapter!!!

    DB
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  • From ANON - Melusine on September 14, 2012
    Love it! Absolutely cannot wait to see what the surprise is with it. I have some guesses, but knowing you and your writing, it will be better than I imagined! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From Kimbovet on September 10, 2012
    That was HOT!!! ooo ooo ooo! *hand raised* I want to know what the Draco dildo special feature is. :-P KUTGW!
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  • From ANON - Sincerely on September 10, 2012
    Love your story, your writing, you!! Please update soon, but don't push yourself too hard

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  • From deathraven on September 10, 2012
    LOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!! ohh amazing as always! hehehehe that was a very hot chapter, i cant wait to see the "sweet" side of severus when he talks to melody! well if he has a sweet side that is! i'll be waiting for the next installment!!
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  • From ANON - Track45 on September 10, 2012
    I was excited to see that this story was updated this morning. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - thegirl191 on September 10, 2012
    YAY this is great thankyou :D
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  • From demonsangel on September 10, 2012
    Wicked chapter, love the "surprise" ending XD Typical Draco. I am going to guess and say that it allows him to actually control it, maybe even feel through it. Perhaps even it showing a version of him attached to it. Also, poor Sev, that had to be hard to hear, but he needed it. Can't wait till the next chapter!

    Couple things to point out. When they are having sex after their little talk in the room and you have Draco's fingers slipping between them, you ended the sentence on the word "mashed" and though it was obvious he went for her clit, it was still odd. Also, when he is fingering her in the club while they watch Sev and Melody, you used "once" instead of "one" flick and in the same sentence you use "drown" which I think should have been "drowned."
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  • From StarrCrystal on September 09, 2012
    OMG I'm so glad I decided to read this! It was well worth it but I'm so mad it ended then!! Update soon!
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  • From Kimbovet on September 07, 2012
    Brilliant as always!!! Glad Draco & Hermione are mated now & Remus & Hermione have called a truce. Sirus is such a nasty prick in this story but I hope you try to redeem him somehow, for Harry's sake. Happy to hear about the new job & sorry about he family member with the bum shoulder.
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  • From ANON - colao on September 06, 2012
    wonderful fun!
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  • From ANON - Track45 on September 06, 2012
    Another great chapter of course. I love this story. I look forward to finding it updated every time I check the site. Congrats on the job! I just hope this story doesn't get left behind in the wake of everything. Looking forward to reading more, hopefully soon!
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on September 06, 2012
    fantastic chapter, excited to read more
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  • From LadyFreak on September 06, 2012
    DAMN! Broken bones? geez that was one rough session. Looking forward to the non-bone breaking possible BDSM scenes ;) In fact, i'm rereading bound just for that purpose hehe. Keep them coming. I absolutely love this
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