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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From Hpforever777 on September 06, 2012
    Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm new at this website, how can I get updates when another chapter is up?
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  • From ANON - misty on September 06, 2012
    YOU GOT A JOB!!!! YAY!!!! Seriously though congrats on that. And the shoulder break sucks. I'm so sorry. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Solariel89 on September 06, 2012
    My god, the new chapter is fucking amazing!!! (Pun only half intended) I really hope this keeps her safe....

    Congrats on the job! Sorry about the shoulder break.... Sounds so painful.... :(
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  • From demonsangel on September 06, 2012
    Ouch! Broken anything hurts and with you equating that to a broken back, I can imagine how it feels, having fractured my spine this summer. I wish whoever it was a speedy recovery!

    As to the story, great chapter! Can't wait for the next. There was a couple things I noticed. An extra "at" somewhere, though I will be damned if I can't find it now. And you used "then" and when I think you meant "them" when Draco was feasting on Hermione's chest.

    Great job! A pleasure to read your work as always.
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  • From ANON - Sincerely on September 05, 2012
    I totally thought your story was 12 chapters.... I have been completely engrossed by it for about the last three hours! I absolutely love, love, love the relationships and the plot line you have come up with. And holy shit! Your smut! Phenomenal, and trust me, I know good smut when I read it. When I got to the end of the 11th chapter I was so ready to push next, but it wasn't there! I was so bummed! Please update soon, you talented, brilliant you!
    P.S. You can tell I mean it from my name
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  • From dracoschick007 on September 04, 2012
    Love this!!!! I am soooo looking forward to reading, more!!!
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  • From ANON - amy on September 04, 2012
    Loving your story! A little bummed there was a bit more tension, and build up to the claiming- I love the dominant/sub dynamic between Hermione and Draco. Don't let him lose all his dark edge ;)

    Keep up the excellent story telling! So looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From Kimbovet on September 04, 2012
    Draco & Hermione are finally going to claim each other. Yay!!! So looking forward to that as well as how Harry is going to take that news.
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  • From LadyFreak on September 04, 2012
    Awesome! I think that was a realistic make-up. I'm glad they got to talk things out. I like this Draco lots. But i must say you are cruel with teasing us with the idea of a claiming and then ending the chapter *scoffs* really woman! :) Can't wait for the next
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  • From DB1 on September 04, 2012
    @11 yay!! Update soon

    DB
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  • From Solariel89 on September 04, 2012
    It was short, but full of Draco and Hermione goo, which made me happy! :D I hope everything's okay.... Family emergencies are never easy. Take care, okay?
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  • From ANON - Track45 on September 04, 2012
    Another great chapter. I was a little sad to see how short it was but with a speedy update I think I can overlook it lol. I can't wait to read more again soon.
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  • From ANON - Lifvared on September 04, 2012
    Okay, this is the first time i've ever reviewed to you but I couldn't stand it anymore. I've read you story since it's second chapter and it's bloody brilliant, this last chapter was just over the top. You're an awesome writer, please keep on with the good work because you're doing great. The plot is magnificent, the perfomance of the characters beyond perfect, I really, really want to read the end of this story because it's just awesome. Don't make us wait too much because it's unbearable.

    Xoxo,
    Lifvared
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  • From DB1 on September 03, 2012
    @10 loving it!! Please update soon

    DB
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  • From ANON - Shibby on September 03, 2012
    So I tried to post earlier but it didn't appear so if this review pops up twice I'm sorry. Anyway, this story is great. I really like the character development of everyone. I'm also curious to see the direction you take Hermione and Remus' friendship. Anyway, I'm hoping for an update soon!
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