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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Jacqui on September 01, 2012
    Awesome story! Love the plot and the unique direction it's headed. On the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!!
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  • From LadyFreak on August 31, 2012
    Amaaaazing!! I like that you're introducing Harry into this story early. Amazing chapter!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on August 31, 2012
    Hurry and post more!!! I need to know what happens next!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - misty on August 31, 2012
    You have seriously ruined me for practically any other author. I think I told you when I was reading "Bound" that I can't reread HBP or DH any more. And I wanted to repeat that here. JKR is a very good author but I think you are better. Your characters are better developed and their actions make more sense because they are true to how you've written them. Just saying. You are amazing and I'll repeat it. If you have anything actually published I would buy everything!!!
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  • From ANON - Track45 on August 31, 2012
    This is such a great story. I cant wait to read more. Please post again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - thegirl191 on August 31, 2012
    How can I look for errors when all I want to do is read the story ... hahaha :) thank you :D
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  • From ANON - buttercup on August 31, 2012
    wow i wasn't expecting draco to become a vamp just yet but me likey.. and are you also going to keep your story going along the lines of the book?
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  • From Solariel89 on August 31, 2012
    The turning looks so painful! I'm so glad Draco won out. I was extremely impressed with the diner fight scene. Draco usually acts as the coward, but throwing Alex his silver crucifix showed a brave streak I'm rather fond of. :) I do hope things go well with him as a vampire this early in the game.... Really looking forward to the next chapter. :D
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  • From ANON - Sami C on August 31, 2012
    Wonderful story just like all of your other work. I was so excited to see a new chapter today, it made my evening. Keep up the amazing work.
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  • From LadyFreak on August 30, 2012
    Evil woman to end it that way and of course we are going to review and comment on your amazing writing skills. You put out a line and we bite every time 'hook line and sinker'. Loved this chapter but was cussing at Lysander.
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  • From Kimbovet on August 30, 2012
    I wish to thank your muse for all her great work lately. That was an evil cliffhanger with Draco, so I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ideefixe on August 30, 2012
    Nooo! You cant leave us there. I just have to see his reaction. Gah! Great job, I totally didnt expect Draco to be turned so early. Thank you so ever much for posting.
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  • From ANON - Dragonfire on August 30, 2012
    Thank you, Thank you, Thank you !!! Another fantastic chapter, I absolutely love how you portray Draco and Hermione without breaking their true characters. Keep writing please :)
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  • From ANON - Scarlet on August 30, 2012
    MORE MORE MORE
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  • From ANON - Saphire Phoenix on August 30, 2012
    I have to come up with different theme music-I can't keep hearing the Peanut's Song when I see your pen name. It's so wrong to hear that when I am reading your sexy stories. Nickelback, 3 Doors Down, Carlos Santana...I am mentally calling up that music to drown out Schroeder.

    Yea for Alex! I am glad that he is giving her the choice. I am also very glad that you turned Draco. I also thought his reaction to finding out the woman that he was lusting after was actually Hermione to spot on. Well done, milady. I am so happy that you posted today.
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