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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From DemonicAngel on August 30, 2012
    keep up the fantastic story, loving the reappearance of your OC's :)
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  • From Solariel89 on August 29, 2012
    Absolutely fabulous! I did notice that once, when Hermione is talking to Alex at the house, you accidentally say Melody instead of Hermione.... Other than that, it's absolutely perfect. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2012
    Sending a big heaping pile of chocolate for your muse and thanks for another wonderful chapter! I was having a rather day night then I read this an it cheered me right up! I loved the intereaction between Hermione and Draco (and Melody). Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter of Fooling Fate, I will be checking daily now
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  • From ANON - Melusine on August 29, 2012
    Love, love, love this!! So happy to see Alex back! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Saphire Phoenix on August 29, 2012
    Schroeder was banging away on that little keyboard of his.....another Happy Snoopy Dance. I just love it when Draco is jealous and I adore Alex. I am glad that you are putting him in this story too.
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  • From ANON - dragonfire on August 29, 2012
    More please :) lol x
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  • From ANON - Hannah on August 29, 2012
    YAY I love this story :D thankyou for writing it
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  • From ANON - buttercup on August 29, 2012
    i like alex and the draco undeniable pull towards hermione already is great..
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  • From ANON - misty on August 29, 2012
    I love it!!! I'm so glad Alex is back even if it's not with Melody. And Draco is very believable too. I agree that he would be starting to question all of his family's beliefs at about that age. Even with being forced to take the Dark Mark. I can't wait for his reaction when he finds out who "Rain" really is!!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From LadyFreak on August 28, 2012
    Amazinnng!! One of you names needs fixing though "
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  • From deathraven on August 28, 2012
    ahh love it, cant wait for the next chapter! did you say update... YES PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Ideefixe on August 28, 2012
    You posted!! Thank you for not making us wait! You rock! Im totally intrigued by Draco acting like a spoiled child when his toy is taken away. I love that he doesnt even know her and the pull is that strong.
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  • From ANON - buttercup on August 28, 2012
    are you sure that hermione cant have babies i mean she hermione she has to be far more special than any other vampire. but other than that i really like this story and i cant wait for the next chapter t come out..
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  • From Solariel89 on August 28, 2012
    Absolutely fabulous!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Ideefixe on August 27, 2012
    So you are saying if we review, you post faster!? I think I can handle that. I desperately want to know what happens next. I love this concept, and im so curious to see how Draco reacts to being her mate.
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