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  • From ANON - Cyn on May 19, 2013
    Fabulous story.
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  • From ANON - J.K. Holdenwood on May 16, 2013
    First i have to say it's a wonderfull story which i enjoy. Reading through the chapter i notice a slight 'wrong' thing in the Hermione and Draco dominant thing. Hermione turned Draco if i read correct and as the mother of Draco her will has to be obeyed by Draco. Now with the mating with Draco he can if she wants command her but if Hermione commands Draco he has to obey (which btw the turning of Draco is the only way to make Hermione mate with him was believe able to me then without the turning)
    Just continue with this great story i thought i just comment on the commanding part and will keep reading YOUR story!

    With kind regards,
    Johannes
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  • From Solariel89 on May 15, 2013
    *cries bloody tears of joy and sorrow* I LOVED THIS STORY ALL THE WAY!!!! WHY DID YOU END IT SO HAPPILY?!?!?!?! THEY'VE ALL GOT SUCH BEAUTIFUL FAMILIES AND I LOVE THEM!!!!!!! (Apparently I need sleep.... So glad you wrote this story. It's worth re-reading again and again and again.)
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  • From ANON - LadyFireCrab on May 14, 2013
    I'm usually greatly disappointed and irritates with epilogues, but this one was really great. I loved the pairings and the fact that you had all the vampire couples adopt kids who needed homes.
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  • From ANON - MB 3 on May 13, 2013
    Lovely story. I'm still reading your other two stories too. I've been meaning to review and since I had 2 quick questions while reading the epilogue, thought this would be the best time to do so. What are the ages of the kids? You say that they are adopted, and they are all obviously at Hogwarts, but are they all in the same year or are a few older? Also, is it Sophia or Selena? You had first typed Selena and then it started appearing as Sophia. Or are they two separate kids and I am confusing them?

    Can't wait to finish reading Locked In. Looking forward to Fooling Fate picking back up. Thanks for making my Mondays a little more enjoyable.
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  • From deathraven on May 13, 2013
    I looved this story and im so sad to see its end!! It was so amazing....cross my fingers for a sequel??
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  • From Trelweny on May 13, 2013
    I love how you managed to get them children, even if not biological.

    Congrats on finishing.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on May 13, 2013
    Wonderful ending to a great story! Sad to see it end though. I vote for all 3 naked. :-)
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  • From demonsangel on May 13, 2013
    Aw, but what if we want an Alex or Nancy? XD lol Anyways, great ending hun! I love how they are adopting!...wow...I just imaged all the kids they can adopt over the years o.O That is going to be one HUGE ass family! Cool XD
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on May 13, 2013
    A fitting end and I adored this story. I'm always up for a sexy Severus and a drool-worthy Draco. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on May 08, 2013
    Damn that was a horrendous battle! Glad they were able to save Charlie though. What happened to Doholov? Looking forward to the epilogue.
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  • From ANON - anaidra on May 08, 2013
    Great chapter. Loved it. Cant wait for the epilogue...on the other hand I don't want it to be end ;).
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  • From Solariel89 on May 08, 2013
    Brilliant, as always! So sad that the death toll was still so high. Charlie as a vampire would've been interesting, though I'm glad he decided against it. That's a very noble choice he made.
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  • From ANON - lysana on May 07, 2013
    Great story pls update
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2013
    i thought dumbledore was still alive?
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