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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

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  • From Hardygirl133 on July 29, 2012
    Please keep going!!!! Youcan't just leave me hangin here!!!!
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  • From ANON - colao on July 28, 2012
    curiuos, I look forward to more
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  • From Caoilfhionn on July 28, 2012
    Loved it already. I hope you continue. I like stories where Snape has someone else. I always thought it was a bit silly that he pined over Lily for so long.
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  • From ANON - Mitsu on July 28, 2012
    Hullo! Dropping a line, and hopefully giving a useful review?
    I love your pacing and your phrasing, so many fics are paced wrong or phrased...badly and they ruin what could be a wonderful story. So far, I love this one.
    I've only got two..questions for lack of better terms. 1) I'm going to guess that this is set after the 5th book? If so, would it be possible to make that a bit clearer in someway? I see that you noted it in the author's note, but there are also moments where it's not clear within the story itself.
    2) If Hermione is going to gain her full adult growth due to the change, I'm hoping that Draco will also receive his in some way? I love the tags you've added on to the story, and I'm just wondering how these elements will fit with a juvenile Draco.
    Again, I really like this, and I cannot wait to see where the next chapter takes us. :)
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  • From ANON - misty on July 28, 2012
    PLEASE!!!! more more more. I was so worried when I saw this up instead of another chapter, but keep it going!!!!
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  • From duckducknbear on July 28, 2012
    Dang! Intense...and I love it! Can't wait to see where you take this!
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  • From ANON - Saphirephoenix on July 28, 2012
    Woohoo! New story and it's looking good. Are you making them like Stephanie Meyer's vampires in that they do not sleep? I loved her new mother pointing out how much studying she could get done now. I can't wait to see more....
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