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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From Solariel89 on February 12, 2013
    I was beginning to wonder why Fooling Fate wasn't up. You usually have them posted on the same day. I try to read that one first since it's dark tone has gotten a little daunting for me with everything shitty happening at work. I usually read it, then this one so my fear at the end of FF doesn't linger as heavily.... Anyway, I absolutely loved it! All your descriptions of Draco make him so damn sexy. And I love the costumes! You have the best visual imagery. It's amazing!
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on February 11, 2013
    Unf!!! That was a hot interlude! Enjoyed Hermione verbally defeating Pansy & wish she could've beat Ron bloody. KUTGW
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  • From demonsangel on February 11, 2013
    Great chapter, lots of tiny little twists and kinks for everyone to work on. Poor Lav, she should deck Ron for his behavior when he has a girl. Hermione should cast a low level hex his way as well lol. Maybe a spell that makes everything he eats taste like ash or better yet, slugs XD After all, every girl has their limit! Loved the various little fights through out the chapter. Can't wait to read more and good luck on Fooling Fate! Eagerly awaiting more chapters on all your stories ^^
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  • From Solariel89 on February 05, 2013
    Yay! Lovey dovey sex at the end! :) I loved this chapter! :) If Melody doesn't have a choice but to kill Bellatrix, how are they going to disguise it? Moldy Shorts isn't going to just let her disappear and not wonder where his little lapdog ran off to....
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on February 04, 2013
    Such a kinky Hermione. She keeps Draco on his toes. Hurray for the return of Draco Jr!!! KUTGW
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  • From demonsangel on February 04, 2013
    Somehow, I think if you shut them in a library and sealed them there for the rest of eternity, the two of them would find a way to survive without blood, just siphoning their nutrients straight from the knowledge contained in the books. ANYWAYS, great chapter! I loved the bit on magical theory...that was fun, and made sense really. So, is Dray going to be able to learn how to make his own patronus now? After all, if Sev can, I am sure he can too, and it IS an important asset really.
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  • From ANON - steve on January 29, 2013
    not sure where you get hermoine does ron homework, they fought many time where she did not talk to him, and his grade where still fine. and cant she tell he hurt becouse she lieing to him and keeping secret he love her.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on January 29, 2013
    Finally! About time Snape told Melody he loved her & now Hermione knows Draco loves her as well. Glad they had some alone time, too. Sirius is still a git but at least he apologized.
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  • From Solariel89 on January 29, 2013
    Yay sap! Let's make some syrup next chapter, yeah? :D I loved this one! And after the shit-tastic week I've had, I really needed it. Thank you for such a lovely chapter. Do please keep them flowing. :)
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  • From DB1 on January 28, 2013
    @28 naw great chapter. Update soon.

    DB
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  • From ANON - colao on January 28, 2013
    wow, that was a fluffy chapter but it makes up for all the angst (I prefer fluff, btw)
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  • From ANON - white dragon on January 28, 2013
    thank you for making an absolutely dreadful monday into something wonderful. i actually do a happy dance whenever you update one of your stories (yes, you have me addicted to all three). you have an excellent capacity for storytelling. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Jewels on January 28, 2013
    Awesome chapter...it's about time those boys tell their women what they mean to them, i realize between fighting horcruxs, nightshade, and hunters they have been a little busy but it's too bad it took Melody to almost leave before Severus got it together...thankfully Draco isn't that bad
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  • From ANON - anaidra on January 28, 2013
    I loved the chapter. It was so nice :). And your little comment about them forcing you to profess their love...I couldnt stop laughing :D.
    Cant wait to read more!
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  • From demonsangel on January 28, 2013
    *hands you a jar of bruise paste* Wand abuse is very serious missy, best treat your injuries lol. Great chapter! Though certainly very sappy. Not that that is a bad thing. So, once again Hermione is having a rough time, but both her and Melody got a nice little moment! So happy for Melody ^^ Can't wait to read more!
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