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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From Kimbovet on January 21, 2013
    I definitely think we need an interlude soon so those 2 can "unwind" a little & maybe have Sirius & Melody discuss some things. KUTGW!
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  • From demonsangel on January 21, 2013
    Those two really really do need a break lol. Have Christmas holidays happened yet? I can't remember for some reason. If not, maybe they could take a little vacation and just get some time to themselves. Even a short time would be good for them I think. Give them a chance to relax, reconnect etc. Great chapter by the way, it's always nice to "kill two birds with one stone" lol I have to wonder how Sev would react to knowing that Harry has his book. I mean, we get to see a brief bit in the movie, having most likely figured it out when Harry uses that spell on Draco, but I don't see that happening in this one as he knows Draco is on their side and with Dray being a vamp and all, I don't see him braking down in the bathroom. Though, I wouldn't put it past Sev to have known all along that he had the book, maybe even putting it in the cupboard himself or something. Either way, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - white dragon on January 16, 2013
    thank you so much for this story. it has become my monday go to for "happiness". The story (actually all of your stories) are riveting with such wonderful twists and turns. thank you and please keep up the great work!
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  • From Solariel89 on January 16, 2013
    Awesome! And Ron-bash away! :D I like Ron and all, but he is a hot head and needs to be taken off his high horse. lol If Harry is understanding, once they've explained everything, it'll be enough of a break for the moment. :) They need at least a tiny one. Please? *bat eyelashes* Just one teensy weensy little break...?
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  • From DB1 on January 15, 2013
    @25 great chapter. Update soon!!

    DB
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  • From Kimbovet on January 15, 2013
    Great way for Ginny & Harry to find out about Draco! I firmly believe both of them will accept Draco & Hermione's relationship. Of course Harry will probably yell some & not trust Draco completely but Ginny & Hermione will set him straight. I feel sorry for Ron when Ginny gets to him...well not really. KUTGW!
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  • From Bloodredrose13 on January 14, 2013
    Found this the other day, put all other stories I'm reading on hold so I could get caught up and now I can't wait for an update! I love this!
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  • From Jewels812 on January 14, 2013
    I am enjoying this story....the characters are well developed and the plot line is thought out with attention to detail which a lot of writers miss. Honestly I can't wait for the Ron bashing :) I do like Ron but not when he is a jealous, pig-headed brut which he usually is instead of thinking logically and listening to reason.
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  • From demonsangel on January 14, 2013
    Great chapter! Love the twist with the hunter. It's about time Ginny and Harry found out. At the very least I think Gin can accept it, Harry, probably would if only for Hermione's sake. Plus, it will give him a bit of a break from fretting all the time lol. Can not wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - steve on January 10, 2013
    sorry hate this chapter, why do you like writing ron freaking out, did he freak out when he found linpin was a warewolf, only beccouse he was talking to sirus, mass murder, did he freak out when vadormore was comeing after harry no. so it get tired to read of ron freak out that ooc, and you seem to do it so he out of her life, for some reason you have a hard time writting a draco and hermoine story where ron her best friend, and



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  • From ANON - Sabrina on January 10, 2013
    Love love love this story!!! seriously one of the best fan fiction I have ever read.
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  • From ANON - Krystal on January 09, 2013
    Wonderful to see this story updated. I have been checking periodically so I wouldn't miss it. I have to say that there was something really great going on in this chapter. Not one thing I could put my finger on in particular, but just the general flow maybe. Seeing your AN at the end in that it came easily to you made sense to me. I got that feeling right from the beginning. This might be my favorite chapter so far just because I could tell you enjoyed writing it. Well done. Happy to see you back. Thanks!
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  • From DB1 on January 09, 2013
    @25. Ron's a dick! Great chapter. Update soon

    DB
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  • From HamishMalfoy01 on January 09, 2013
    This is such an amazing story! I have no words that accurately describe just how blown away I am at it. I've just read the whole thing so far in one hit. Love it!

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  • From Kimbovet on January 07, 2013
    Hurray for the update!!! Well I hate that Ron acted like a total git but I really didn't expect anything else from him. Now Harry & Ginny, I expected better from them. I really hope Hermione's luck changes to the better soon or she's not gonna make it.
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