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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From deathraven on January 07, 2013
    AHHHH YES!! An update!! And what an amazing chapter at that! LOOOOVED it!! Excited to see what they will do next!! UPDATE SOON I HOPE??!!?
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  • From demonsangel on January 07, 2013
    Yay! You're back! Great chapter. I feel bad for Hermione but she had a point. That was a really selfless thing for her to do. I am amazed at how horrible Harry and Ginny reacted to her. Maybe she should have told them what Ron said. But still, there was no real damage done to him. And Harry should feel bad because it's his fault for letting Ron use the map in the first place when he knew there were things Hermione needed kept secret, like what she is and being around Sev all the time, and that Ron would see that. Hope you had a great holiday and new year. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Alice on January 05, 2013
    You're perfect for Procastination, I have 4 days till my exam and what am I doing? Reading fanfiction...I'm so hooked on this story! I basically shut down when Deriks - the real ones - head was revealed, my wife was shocked at my outburst but..yeah, it was powerful :///
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  • From deathraven on January 02, 2013
    please please update!!
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  • From ANON - kit on December 28, 2012
    Amazing as always just caught back up with this one. I love how you have to family set up! Happy holidays can't wait for more on either story !
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  • From ANON - Cat on December 18, 2012
    All I could think about when she was wondering if he loved her and she him was the song "so this is love" in cinderella lol. Great chapter. Enjoy your break and holiday and remember that you have readers who love to see your updates! I used to write and know that sometimes a breather is needed and you deserve one, what you have been writing is great and I enjoy reading it. Can't wait to see more when you do get to it both for this and your other one as well.
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  • From Kimbovet on December 17, 2012
    Another nice chapter! I like how Hermione & Draco's relationship gets stronger everytime they face another challenge. Someday they will realize they love each other. It's OK to take time off; we'll still be here when you come back. Just relax & enjoy the holidays. Merry Christmas!!!
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  • From ANON - mike on December 17, 2012
    You see, vampires are
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  • From demonsangel on December 17, 2012
    Jeeze woman, you just like to bring all sorts of new problems into the mix don't you? lol Great chapter. Though I think you may have meant "wonder" instead of "wander" at one point. I can't remember where it was exactly but I think it was when it was mentioned that both Dray and Hermione could not miss classes at the same time because people would start to "wander" *nods* Looking forward to more! Hope your holidays get better.
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  • From ANON - steve on December 17, 2012

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  • From ANON - Odrade on December 13, 2012
    How in the world is there a severed head that looks like "Derik"? I can't wait to read more and find out about this and all the other fabulous (and fabulously awful) things going on in and outside of Hogwarts.

    And can I just say that I love Remus's role in this. I wish he got more time with Hermione though. I miss their friendship. :)
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  • From deathraven on December 11, 2012
    AHHHHH!!! Please don't make it Alex, I've grown very attached to that character! Ohhh very good chapter as always!! YAY on and quick update!! Love this story, I'll be waiting for the next update....just here..in front of my computer....waiting...so when ever your ready... I'll just be here... :)
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  • From Solariel89 on December 11, 2012
    WHAT?!?!?!?! WHO THE HELL DOES THAT HEAD BELONG TO?!?!?!?! And do you SERIOUSLY expect us to wait a FULL WEEK for another chapter?! I'm gonna go insane!!!!!

    P.S.: (please read in a posh British accent because that's how I thought it.) Now that I've had my ranting fit, I must say it was a rather splendid chapter with a marvelously gripping ending. I can't wait for the next installment. :)
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  • From demonsangel on December 10, 2012
    Ok, that last bit was just creepy. All I have to say on that lol. Interesting chapter as usual though. Great job!
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  • From Kimbovet on December 10, 2012
    Dun dun dun!!! Trouble at Hogwarts for Hermione & the gang. Thanks for the update.
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