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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From lely92 on December 06, 2012
    hi im new to adult fanfiction and your story was the first ive read and i have really enjoyed it and cant wait to read more now i just need to find a way to keep track of it could give me a hint on that lol hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on December 06, 2012
    Now that was hot!!! Poor vampy couple indeed. :-)
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on December 04, 2012
    Milady, keep this up and by the time you finish these two fics, your inner child should be as secure as Hermione on a bondage wheel! We love you (notice how much when you are looking on how many hits each of your stories have).
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  • From Solariel89 on December 04, 2012
    AAAAHHHHH!!!!! I FINALLY get caught up and you leave me with this?! What are you trying to do?! Kill me with excitement?! D: It's okay, though! I love the torture! :D
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  • From DB1 on December 03, 2012
    @22 wow exciting drama filled chapters. Can't wait for more.

    DB
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  • From demonsangel on December 03, 2012
    Wait Robert character? Where the heck did that name come from? Did I miss something? o.O >.< Great chapter though.
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  • From ANON - Krystal on December 03, 2012
    Wonderful chapter. Well done on that tense fight scene. I feel so bad for them. That was quite a scuffle.
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  • From deathraven on November 28, 2012
    ABANDON YOU!!? NEVER!! I love your story far to much to ever not check to see if you've updated. I like where you're going, though I don't really know where that is :) But I'm thoroughly enjoying the ride!! Can't wait for the next update, hopefully it will be sooooon!?
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  • From Kimbovet on November 26, 2012
    I applaud your muse for being so busy. :-) Looks like Harry & Ginny may be too observent for Hermione to keep all her secretsaway from them. Poor Madam Blotts; hopefully some good will come to her in the near future. Looking forward to the club & the cave.
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  • From demonsangel on November 26, 2012
    Wonderful chapter. I hope they can do something for the old woman. Sort her mind out, dim the memories, something to give her some peace. Maybe fix up the orphanage too if there are still children about. Nothing like a sudden and very generous anonymous donation. I only found one mistake and that was the use of "classes" instead of "glasses" when Melody was filling them with blood at the dinner table. Looking forward to more as always.
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  • From DB1 on November 24, 2012
    @20 lol great punishment. Update soon
    DB
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  • From GreenFairy on November 22, 2012
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! You are a wonderful writer. This is the first story of yours that I've read but as soon as I'm done with this review I'm going to your page (praying the whole time :) ) that you have more. So, please dont leave a girl hanging with this fic because I don't think I could stand it, and keep writing because I think your AWESOME!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Krystal on November 21, 2012
    I loved the "hypothetical" situation of Ron, Harry, and Hermione in the woods in a tent. That was brilliant. Excited to see what happens with Melody, even though I wish Draco and Hermione didn't have to be so secretive about everything. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
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  • From deathraven on November 21, 2012
    loooved it!...sisters eh? i look forward to see where thats leading! waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter, hopefully you wont be a cruel mistress and your update will be soon!
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  • From ANON - Track45 on November 20, 2012
    With the long break in between chapters, I was concerned that maybe you abandoned the story. I was glad to see it was updated today though. Can't wait for more!
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