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Reviews for Beyond the Pale

By : goldhorse
  • From BreezenBy on January 15, 2024

    Have you ever thought of uploading to Ao3?


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  • From WhiteDove on June 07, 2022

    It was definitely one of my favourites! Absolutely loved it! 


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  • From ArtemisJade on July 26, 2018

    Oh my goodness. I know it was 40 chapters but the tempo and the storyline did not make it feel that long. Fantastic story and plot. The last visit to the kink cub had me laughing because of the motley crew that went. Cant wait to read your other stories 


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  • From FriendofTrees on January 07, 2018

    I almost never read vampire fics, but this one drew me in and I couldn't stop! It was a very fun read. I like the dynamics between the family a lot. Thank you!


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  • From Tnteacups on February 05, 2017

    This fanfic is absolutely amazing. I loved the storyline, the character development, and the way you write. It was entertaining, and captivated my attention from the first chapter. I love how you inserted original characters, without having them take over the whole show, like many author's OC's do. I loved the family ties, and your version of vampires. I really liked how it took Ron two tries to get right with the vamps, and I LOVE that you didn't kill off Fred at the end. :D
    After reading 40 chapters, I basically just read a whole book, and even though it was a fanfiction, it had it's own flavor, and feeling, that leaves a unique memory, and feeling separate from the original works. That's probably my favorite part about this piece, the feling of it being it's own story, instead of just another fanfic.

    If you wrote a book of your own, with these kind of vampires, in an original setting, with entirely OC, I would definitely read it. Though your spelling in places was off, the overall wonder of the plot and relationships made it easy to enjoy the story around those flaws. Though I was a bit conused by the karaoke bits, I didn't hate them, and I actually really enjoyed the use of them to bolster the romances. I loved the slow transition between Hermione and Draco's relationship from enemies to lovers, and appreciated how none of the family seemed to have an unbelievably fairytale perfect love. They all had things to work through, and it added an extra layer of goodness on top of the satisfying heap of story.

    (I actually just made this account, so I could express my love of Beyond the Pale.) *so good* I'm honestly probably about to go read your other works, too.


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  • From ANON - Guest on November 23, 2015
    This is amazing and well written. I'm very pleasantly surprised.
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  • From meldz on November 02, 2015
    I lost sleep with this story, yet i never regretted it. I love every part of it except the 18 yrs later part. It's not bad it just lacks heart or emotions that will tug your heart. Unlike the previous chapters the last bit is a bit rushed and flat. Nevertheless I really enjoyed this.
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  • From Yoffee on February 15, 2015
    I read this story over a week. Enjoyed every bit of it. So sad it's over. Thank you for writing it!
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  • From Rosajean on July 29, 2014
    So I never really thought I'd be interested in reading Harry Potter vampire stories, but I happened to stumble across your story Junkies and was really drawn into it. So when I finished reading it, I had to go looking for more now that I'd discovered this whole new field of stories to get into. I just completed this story...it took me a couple days reading in every spare moment I had and I loved it! You are a very talented writer! Now however I'm hoping to find a vamp!fic with Severus as the dominant and Hermione as his sub. I'm not a huge fan of Deaco to be honest but you made him tolerable. I really just don't find Draco to be a dominant. Everything about him screams sub to me. But anyways, I digress. I just wanted to say that I truly enjoyed reading your writing and thanks for introducing me to a whole other area that I really didn't think I would enjoy. And do you have or will you write in the future any vampire stories featuring Severus and Hermione, sans Draco (or as a minor character)? If you haven't yet, please consider it!
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  • From Annecia89 on May 07, 2014
    I've been glued to my phone for the last 2 days!! I absolutely loved your story!! Now I have to read everything you've written, lol!!
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  • From ANON - kat on March 11, 2014
    Hi there this fic is awesome :) you are an amazing writer. since I can't actually message you which is upsetting I figured I'd just ask in here Lol. could you write a Fred weasley and Hermione story? I can't find that many of them and the ones I have been really good but I love your writing with the draco Hermione ones I figured I would ask. :)
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on January 30, 2014
    Just finished this story. As with ALL of your stories...I LOVED IT!!!! Now, I think I have read everything you have written, up to and including the latest; Mistletoe. I can't wait for more. And if you ever decide that you will finish that original novel, I would be more than happy to beta it for you. I finished my first one in November 2013 and am now editing it *ugh*. If you would be interested in being a beta for a science fiction romance...I would LOVE your input(eclectic_pet@yahoo.com). Until your next fiction...More, please!!!
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  • From ANON - Heather on December 30, 2013
    LOVED this story!!! Great writing, great premise. Loved the relationships formed between the whole coven! Great read!
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  • From ANON - Sincerely on October 04, 2013
    I remember your story from the very beginning, and I just realized a few nights ago that I had never finished it. So, I did the only thing I could think of; I tracked your story down (not difficult) and finished it. Goldhorse, you are amazing, and a very talented writer. I loved your story, and I even felt emotions at the end. i only really feel at the end of good stories. Thank you for your strength, and it looks like you've been through some hard times, judging by your updates. Good luck to you with all your endeavors in life; you have great talent, and a seemingly wonderful personality.
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  • From ANON - Misa on September 22, 2013
    This is the first time I have reviewed on this site and I must tell you, when I first started reading I couldn't stop. I literally read all 40 chapters in one sitting. I was completely useless to the outside world. I haven't been this enthralled since the books first came out. You deserve much more than just kudos for that amazing plot like with just the right amount of smut. Honestly this is the best thing I have read in at least 2 years.
    You're an amazing author and have amazing OC characters. Thank you for your wonderful story and please, if you write anything else let me know!
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