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Reviews for Bound to You

By : KusanoSaku
  • From Jan on January 12, 2020

    It was a sweet ending, absolutely loved this story.


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  • From Inshadowsidream on March 02, 2019

    This feels very rushed, and it is a little confusing in places. Your scene transitions were jarring, and left me going "wait a minute, what?"  Harry being pregnant so suddenly seemed forced. I liked the idea of the story, but as it is, I quickly lost interest.


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  • From Zoha-Lixue on January 05, 2019

    This is all happening really fast and it kind of makes it hard to read. Otherwise I think the idea is a neat one. 


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  • From BookDragon on September 29, 2017

    But Diggory wasn't in the competition in your prequel, Reforging Old Bonds


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  • From ANON - on July 10, 2016

    Thank you for writing and sharing. Enjoyed it. 


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  • From ANON - Tianna on May 02, 2016
    The Chapter was Qutstanding
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  • From ANON - Leslie on September 14, 2015
    riveting story, always need to know what's happening with the next chapter. Your writing has only improved over time.
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  • From AFFModerator on March 20, 2015

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  • From ANON - Kk on September 06, 2013
    Umm your story doesn't make any sense. You said in the beginning he found out that he was pregnant at 2 months but now when he is revealing the pregnancy to Remus he says 5 months. You obviously need to retread your story because your timeline is all over the place. Other then hat it is good. Btw isn't Severus the one who made the potion. Then in chapter 10 he says that he knows Harry is not ready for a baby yet he dosed him anyway? Seriously please rewrite this
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  • From Jan on June 18, 2013
    Poor Seamus, hope his blue balls syndrome gets cure soon ^_~

    Please update chapter 33 soon.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 13, 2013
    What a nice tying up chapter.
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  • From wavedancer70 on April 30, 2013
    More chappies please
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 02, 2013
    Finished the whole story...wow lot of characters and events (good/bad) to keep track of. A great job!! Always enjoy your stories sooo much. I feel so bad for Lucius now that we know that most of his kicking Draco off the family was due to jealousy because he couldn't have the person he was in love with (Severus you said). How painful that must be! Doesn't make what he did right but ouch it must hurt! Please say that baby Narissa loves Harry also. It sounds like the twin girls have picked one to be their parent & the other is an unimportant maid to be used if absolutely necessary. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Oh you are going to find someone for Hermione that will take the polish off Ron & his bratty Mrs I hope. Not crazy about her but she's not 100% bad - used by Dumbledore. Ron needs to learn a lesson & suffer a bit even if Dumbledore did twist him. Nemia also needs somebody. She is so young & sad to be by herself & pregnant. That song was so beautiful! Heartbreaking!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2013
    Not a bad idea for a story, but the story is shallow. The characters aren't well developed, nor is the plot line.
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  • From DopeyDDHill on August 06, 2012
    Did you mean to name one of the girls the same as dumbledor's sister?
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