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Reviews for Marriage 101

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  • From horsesrules on October 17, 2013
    write more its really good
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  • From Danyealle on August 23, 2012
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  • From ANON - Bree on August 22, 2012
    Plz finish this story....it's wonderful
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  • From tryhonesty326 on August 09, 2012
    I'm kind of appalled at the very tactless and insensitive way that "the gays" were outed first thing in the first chapter like that. Just can't get past it, I'm sorry :/
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  • From ANON - CM on August 09, 2012
    This story is so sweet and wonderful! I hope you continue and update soooonnn!
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  • From ANON - Kayla on August 08, 2012
    *Squeals* I love this story! It's amazing and so funny and cute. Harry and Draco are beyond adorable with each other, and I don't want to say too much bc I know that sometimes I look at reviews b4 reading a story, but I just have to say this story is so awesome. I'm so excited to read more! It's such a unique idea and I love how you write; all the details are wonderful! I can't wait for more :)
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  • From yaoified on August 08, 2012
    wow! So much fluff even my sweet tooth was aching lol.

    "You have beautiful porcelain skin that sparkles in the sun"
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  • From lissagal99 on August 08, 2012
    You're really losing me in this sex scene. You said Draco came and sat on the bed. Then they were suddenly on a wall and back on the bed? And he went from being "huge" to having a slender waist and their being no space in between himself and Harry.

    Also, in previous chapters there were 2 beds and now one queen sized bed. I never presumed the other beds to be queen sized since you said they were side by side.
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  • From Madamdragon on August 08, 2012
    Read it, and it's interesting. HOpe things turn out ok for both boys. Update again soon please.
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  • From ChristinaMcMillan on August 08, 2012
    love it cant wait to read more
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  • From Alleya on August 08, 2012
    I like the idea and plotting process you are planning for this story. It's one of those things I've always wondered about in the harry potter universe and I'm glad you've written a story about it. I'd like to point out that the dialogue of the characters, especially McGonagall's is very out of character and thus make its very hard for me to keep interest in the story. Not to say I haven't read every chapter, but the speed in which you are writing this and their dialogue seems a bit rushed and American. The out of characterness makes it hard for anyone to relate and makes it less interesting. Needless to say I have read all your chapters and I really would like to see where you are going with his. Your very talented on keeping the story fluffy, happy and fun (which is what I suck at). My only suggest you go back, read it out loud and maybe try to flesh out the characters and build up to those scenes rather than just lay it all out there.

    I hope you don't take offense to my post and only see it as constructive criticism. Please don't take my words to heart, keep in mind that this is your story not mine. Eitherway good luck and I really hope to see more of Marriage 101. If you need a beta or any suggestions for your writing, I would be happy to help.
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  • From Leania07 on August 07, 2012
    I told myself I wouldn't read anymore Drarry until I read more Snarry first, but...damnit! This one caught my attention. Obviously something happened (perhaps it won't be a simulation anymore?), and I wonder how things will turn out. *Sigh* while I wait for your update, I resume my quest for more Snarry.
    (In other words, keep up the good work!)

    Leania
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