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Reviews for A Simple Proposal

By : Tri
  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 22, 2012
    Oh goodie! You're back with this story. :-) I am looking forward to finding out his true motives, because she's right. A man like Lucius doesn't do anything just to be nice. lol Thanks and (if you are American) Happy Thanksgiving! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Mitsu on November 22, 2012
    I'll admit, up until the third chapter, I had my reservations about this fic. After the fourth one though? I cannot wait to see what you're going to do next. Hope your muse cooperates!
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on November 22, 2012
    I LOVE that Hermoine, finally gave in. That means we can get to the good juicey stuff *wink*

    Can't wait for your next post.
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  • From ANON - Hittichowa on November 21, 2012
    Oh god please say that you are going to finish this story??!!! I'm so excited and its only three chapters in! XD
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  • From DB1 on August 31, 2012
    @3 update update!!

    DB
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 24, 2012
    Love the title, as nothing with Lucius is ever going to be "simple." lol I hope Hermione and Ron can eventually be friends when things go wrong for them, and that Ginny and Harry are there for her, too. I wonder if Lucius somehow sent that dream... Hmmmm More soon please!! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From AbbyRose on August 24, 2012
    Hey! SO im really intrigued by your story. I dont know whether or not you have the rest planned out/ written, but it seems to me a good incentive for Hermione to go to Lucius would be if she found Ron cheating. And I'm glad you gave a reason for why Narcissa is out of the picture, and also showed that Lucius did care, and it wasnt just a marriage of convenience. It makes a good set-up for if they have a happy ending together, showing that Lucius can love, and loves deep when he does.

    Anyway, good story! :D
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  • From DB1 on August 24, 2012
    @2. Update update!!! Love the story can't wait to read more!!!

    DB
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  • From ANON - MissCourtneyC on August 24, 2012
    Is Severus Snape alive in your story???
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  • From kadajclone on August 23, 2012
    kinda odd seeing Ginny admit something like that considering the 'bad boy' in question almost got her killed in the past lol. its like "yeah sure he may have killed and tortured people and looked down on my family....but damnit the man is hot' lol.
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  • From DB1 on August 19, 2012
    @1 great story do far!! Can't wait to read more

    DB
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  • From ANON - Tori on August 18, 2012
    I fell in love the first time I read it, its so simple yet so luscious at the same time. We know how stubburon our girl is but can she be pushed into a corner by our Lu? I can't wait to see it. And I like the fiery hex at the end it was such a prelude to things to come. Well I zee tori ask no I beg you to conintue this wonderful story, and let's see where things go. btw I love the long first chapter and how you displayed Lu and hermoine can't wait to see the others.


    Tori
    P.S
    Don't be afraid to spice it up in chapters, with a little tension.


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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on August 18, 2012
    cant wait for the update
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  • From ANON - notlori925 on August 18, 2012
    great first chapter. can't wait to see where the story goes from here. thanks for sharing.
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