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Reviews for The Dance

By : corsochan
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 17, 2012
    Enjoyed, enjoyed and would love to read a sequel. I thought that male wizards could get pregnant yet you were saying that they had to find someone to carry a child for them?
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  • From ANON - unneeded on September 14, 2012
    yay for happy ending y ness and lemons. I think you wrapped up most of the loose ends rather neatly.
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  • From savannah19742001 on September 13, 2012
    You left it at a good place and I feel that this story could be complete unless your muse hits you again for more of this story. I really liked how Harry and Serevus were in this story. Thank you for a great story.
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  • From bloodshound on September 09, 2012
    as final battles go, that one was fairly loss free. Yay for insider info and meticulous forward planning. ^^
    I did spot a typo or two but apart from that...
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  • From savannah19742001 on September 09, 2012
    This was a great chapter and I loved the thought put into the battle. I can't wait to read more...
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  • From bloodshound on September 04, 2012
    at least four misused words. a wrong their used, none in place of non, through instead of throw and dye in place of die.
    apart from that... I'm glad the kids are out safe. the set up is ready, now comes the hard part, the waiting for the other shoe to drop.
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  • From savannah19742001 on September 02, 2012
    I can't wait to read about the battle, I think you did a good job making a setup chapter for the battle ahead. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From djaddict on September 02, 2012
    *bounces* More cliffies? Evil. Lol

    Good battle plan. They needed one in the original. Hope it works!

    Can't wait for Chap 12!
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  • From djaddict on August 29, 2012
    Good plan. Hope it works! Too many died in book 7.

    Can't wait to see what comes next.

    Enjoying!
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  • From bloodshound on August 23, 2012
    well, that's promising. Is har a Horcrux in this? I wonder how they're going to get at yon mutant snake. Luc and Draco are well out of it.
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  • From djaddict on August 22, 2012
    Yea! Update!

    Good twist on the Malfoy situation. I am assuming that Harry is not a horcrux then? I hope not!

    More pretty please!
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  • From teriwright on August 22, 2012
    Arrrrghhh!!! i can't believe you ended it there. please finish it soon!
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  • From djaddict on August 22, 2012
    Really good story! Enjoying Severus' POV.

    Can't wait for more.
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