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By : TalisRuadair
  • From Jan on September 07, 2012
    Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on September 05, 2012
    seriously... just get the house elves to go looking for him. I mean everyone underestimates the creatures and it's within their sphere of influence that the lord... currently harry, reproduce. Since he's having issues with that, send the little critters out to find him the counter spell, or locate another solution. problem solved.

    as to what Mio's on about, I'm betting altering the past has altered the future and blah blah.
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  • From bloodshound on September 04, 2012
    isn't it though... it's soooooo much more fun with smut. ^^

    well, there's some emotional scars that are on the mend. I'm betting when they get down to this times version of Har and draco things will be MUCH different and for the better. I'm glad those 'tards have been put away. No one deserves what they did... no one.
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  • From Jan on September 02, 2012
    Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - rosealynne/kaidaluna on September 01, 2012
    Love this story keep up awesome job.. oh btw thanks for getting me hooked on there be dragons harry lol
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on August 31, 2012
    just wanted to say that i love this story....i just love seeing new updates so thank you.....i can't want to see draco's reaction when he finds out that harry is sleeping with his father and severus...i know that will be great.
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  • From bloodshound on August 31, 2012
    I'm glad har is being less over controlling now. It will be interesting to see how having the others there and tossed into the mix effects things.
    I don't blame you. there be Dragons is an epic story. also try 'rise of the Drackens' for a suck you in story.
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  • From Sera21 on August 30, 2012
    Oooh, so theres going to be a triad? What a lovely idea :) Wish we knew what Severus and Lucius thought of teh idea. When Harry told Lucius with Severus in the room there was pretty much zero reaction to the fact that they will all be having sex with each other...or just with Harry? Does Sev even like Lucius? I mean Harry could try and ask right? XD That might be important... Harrys making some big plans and he hasn't even asked Sev if he even wants kids. I mean I know both of them have had the slave potion but from how Sev was in the books I always presumed he hated kids lol...and for that matter teaching potions, thought he wanted to teach Defence against the dark arts? Does he even like teaching? Does harry even care :/ ?? Oh and madame Pomfrey is observant like a hawk XD How did she know Harry and Sev were together??? lol
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  • From Sera21 on August 30, 2012
    Oh I just thought of something? How did the other( younger) boys in Slytherin react to regulus telling the truth about his rape? I mean they must have suspected something...were there other victims in Slytherin as well? Do the other boys hate Regulus or Arrigo for revealing a weakness in their house?
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  • From Sera21 on August 30, 2012
    Oookay, next chapter. Not bad. Kind of wondering if Severus and Lucius both swalloed some heavy duty truth telling potion. Can't belive both of them just came out with the truth just like that. No umm-ing or trying to hide the truth or even half-truths. Just like that. and then Severus admitted what happened in the most intimate detail in front of his worst enemies?? Is that the slave potion talking? Now that I found really hard to believe :/ Poor Sev, humiliated in front of his long time bullies..I also can't belive that auror Longbottom who has just finished his training would body bind his superior after only one rude comment! Can you say fired?? I bet Dawlish is gonna pull rank and have Nevs dad fired! I'm also really worried about Lucius. He just blurted out all those names! Arn't the death eaters going to try and hunt him down and torture him for giving their names away? I also lol'd when Lucius said " my virgin hole" XD...so unlike him haha, he's way more likely to say something like " the bloom of my innocence was stolen" or something to that effect...
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  • From Sera21 on August 30, 2012
    Wow! I can really see an improvement in your writing as well as the content :) Many people would get angry at criticism but it is nice to see that you took it into account...its also nice to see you explain some of the stuff from earlier. I kind of wish you had spent a little more time on the drunk Lucius scene. Before now Lucius has been an uptight, proud bastard and suddenly he is drunk and calling Harry "master". I hope you will take some time in teh next chapter to explain that metamorphosis. What would drive a proud and private man like Lucius to call a 17 year old boy "master"? and why Harry instead of some dungeon master in knockturn alley he could just pay for his services and silence? I presume he has kept his identity as a sub secret all these years so why suddenly admit what he truly is to the man who killed his old master? Also, I can't believe Hermione was as stupid as to send a howler into the past with harrys real name :/ Least she could have done was call him by a nickname like " golden boy" or something XD Maybe Ron shagged the smart out of her???
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  • From Jan on August 28, 2012
    Please update chapter 7 soon.
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  • From Jan on August 27, 2012
    Please update chapter 6 soon.
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  • From ANON - heartstar on August 27, 2012
    Interesting I was wondering how you were going to explain the howler. lol More please when you can thank you.
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  • From hellangelhellina on August 26, 2012
    It is good to know there is a reason for that. I say after winter break so that Severus and Lucius can get use to the new situation.
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