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Reviews for Draken Blood

By : Morbid_and_Sexy
  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on January 11, 2013
    I for one am enjoying reading your version of Starlight Massacre's, The Rise of the Drakens, and hope you don't let flamers stop you from continuing it. As long as you have the original author's permission and have let the site moderators know so they can take the proper steps to verify it, then I don't see what the problem is with some reviewers. I do think you should probably report the flamers/trolls but then again just ignoring them because they are ignorant and immature is much better. In my eyes, flamers are the same as bullies and you can actually feel sorry for them because they are rather pitiful, aren't they? Good job and don't let flamers bully you.
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  • From ANON - Chandre on December 11, 2012
    Ahhhhh! Clifhanger! Would really like to know what Hermione's inheretance is! Loving this story so please, PLEASE, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on December 01, 2012
    I just found this story!!!!

    When I read the chapter where you listed the possible future mates, I wanted to shout TOM, SEVERUS, and BLAISE; for sure. I think the other three will add some spice.

    I can't wait until TOM becomes more involved. I hope it is HOT & STEAMY. Will Tom, Severus, and Blaise be joining Draco, in having additional fun with Hermoine *pleading puppy dog eyes*?

    Only one point...Harry needs to stand up to Ron and give him a MAJOR detention. Perferably with Hermoine, who will Kick his Ass.
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  • From HeartStar on November 30, 2012
    its ok hun I hope everything works out with your family. thank you for the chapters
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  • From bloodshound on November 30, 2012
    first let me just say i'm aiming for constructive criticism here rather than marshmallow toasters (flames).

    I clicked on this cause i love a good dracken story... but so far i'm disappointed. Really, so far this is like a cliff notes version of 'rise of the drackens'... with added severus and unsubtle dumbles. i know the base chappie (which u haven't bothered to use) was put up for adoption and at least three ppl ran with it... but this, i'd be surprised if you don't get called on it for idea pinching... you aren't even very subtle about it. I hope you asked first.

    i mean, come on, you're capable of your own ideas... (why the heck would the dursleys bother carting har to japan and dumping him... they had to know wizards would come looking. a bit more explanation of back story couldn't hurt.)Also, what year are har and the others in and is dumbles permitted to make a student a teacher... believe it or not, little details do matter. they help flesh out the story and make it less amateur... which, sadly, this one does right now.

    i thought mio was his cover rather than his mate? hang on... is mio dracken too and a dom? you haven't really explained that... at all. since when and how does mio have critta blood. i thought she was supposed to be mb?

    also, Sanitarium would have sufficed. it being an old school name for a place to dump crazies off at.

    YAY! you did acknowledge her and ROTD... that's alright then.

    i mean i can see several of your own ideas in there, they're just not as fleshed out as they could be and i think, need to be to make things a bit clearer. I for one am a bit confused. let me just state. BACK GROUND AND CONTEXT ARE IMPORTANT... well, if you don't want readers to be lost like me.
    things like, are remi and siri permanent residents of the castle. where and how mio got her dracken blood. what caused the golden trio split and alienated har from dumbles. etc. get the idea?

    on the plus side i'm happy to say either your bata ing skills or your bata are excellent. few to none in the way of typos and grammatical errors. pls do keep that up. nothing kills a story faster then being error ridden... besides wall of text syndrome.

    keep trying and kudos for being brave enough to post... (i have stories, i'm just not satisfied enough with them to go through the trouble of putting them out. >> I KNOW i can do better.)


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  • From ANON - Ailish on November 30, 2012
    This story is different than starlight massacres (spelling?), but very good. I like the new pairings with Sev not being so sad. As for the family issues, I understand completely. I am going through similar phases and cycles. Hope everything works out for you. Keep up the good job.
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  • From ChristinaMcMillan on November 29, 2012
    Love it but you posted Chapter 8 two times
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  • From demonsangel on November 29, 2012
    I liked the new chapter. But you posted it twice >.> Sounds like Harry got a little fed up with the whole searching thing lol Also, "har-har"? *shudders* poor guy XD Why didn't they get after Lavender though like they got after Molly for hugging Harry?
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  • From ANON - jspgnh1234 on October 01, 2012
    while the story line has potential...but it's not developed enough....you should think about rewrithing it.
    at the moment i cant read past the begining of ch 2....it makes no sense you need to strech the story...it seems more like a summry then a story.... :(
    (and i red the original...
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  • From emo_yaoi_girl on September 24, 2012
    Hello! I am a new reader of this story. I'm reading the original (waiting for new chapters) and I love it. So when I saw this I thought to myself "Oh I HAVE to read this". I was right, I love it so far. It's a bit fast moving but still really good. As for Harry's mates, I have to vote for Severus and Tom! And an original character or 2 ;)
    I really like how you made Hermione one of Harry's dominate mates! It would be awesome if she was somehow one of the babies "fathers"
    I eagerly await the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Cat on September 06, 2012
    All of the above
    All of the above
    I can just see it now, what with all the Drama in Harry's life.
    Besides he is powerful so he needs many mates to ground his power.
    And they could be his own army to save him from Dumbledore what with all of his schemes.
    He needs a lot of mates to keep him out of trouble.
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  • From Fullnight on August 31, 2012
    I enjoy your story and am looking foward to reading more of it.
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  • From Scioneeris on August 27, 2012
    Oooh, nice start. I hope the chapters get longer eventually. :) Hermione as the first mate was a good twist. I'm kinda rooting for Severus, 'cause I really like him and Anthony seems pretty cool too.
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  • From Jan on August 26, 2012
    8?
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  • From ANON - heartstar on August 26, 2012

    I love this and await more thank you!
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