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By : Lomonaaeren

From ANON - delia cerrano on October 10, 2012
Liking it but I think they need more personal time in order to see each other for more than their public personas. Maybe the Ministry Ball will help.
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From moodysavage on October 09, 2012
ah... Draco wants something more from Harry than just duty. He's interested in that look he had when helping George. It will be interesting to see what he does to try to get that look for himself and if he realizes that he will have to give parts of himself as well in order to earn it.
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From ANON - polka dot on October 09, 2012
Go Harry, don't let Draco suck up all your time and attention.
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From SParker on October 09, 2012
#14...

his brother-cousin-husband-son??? O_o
Daaamn...that sounds so...wrong. There were no
blood ties in that wedding ritual I know, but
still...

Anyway, will Harry do the same with Draco's mother?
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From ANON - delia cerrano on October 08, 2012
Wow! They are really each expecting to lead lives individually. I hope it doesn't take too long for them to start noticing each other & appreciate each other at least a little bit. I know I'm pushing them together right away butttt...
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From SParker on October 07, 2012
about #13..

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From bloodshound on October 07, 2012
ooooh, come, at once huh. that sounds ominous.
well, bummer. What are Teddy and Andy living on? Are they still around? I can't remember.
neh, if/when they divorce would har get some of his vaults back or do the Malfoys keep them for the trouble?
it seems har and draco's ideas of duty don't really mesh but har is doing his best. I get a sort of 'marking time' feel when har is in the manor. It's not really home, it's a duty he's doing and his real life is elsewhere.
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From disgruntledfairy on October 06, 2012
Love the chilly interaction between Draco and Harry. Definitely reminds the reader of who we're dealing with here lol. I gotta admire Harry's determination to make this situation work. Looking forward to seeing how the situation with Narcissa goes. The detail you went into for her condition was interesting. Details really do make a story :) Thanks for updating!
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From ANON - polka dot on October 04, 2012
wow it's a marriage made in hell. Harry is a desperate housewife
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From SParker on October 04, 2012
about #12..

I meant...having this chapter told entirely in Draco's pov, But
when I think about it, it doesn't seem fair.

...and Harry is being a bit obssessive, isn't he?

...AND it kinda feels like Harry & Draco are kind of orbiting
around each other, like they don't know how the other will react
if someone winds up saying the wrong thing.

Also, will they do anything remotely fun together in the coming chapters?
After all, they have 5 years..
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From bloodshound on October 04, 2012
well, on the plus side, at least draco didn't tell him he couldn't go. What happened to the black vaults. Did har get them and did they get handed over too?

well, at least har is trying to be co operative. For a slyth draco is sure light on the tact though, with what he expects. I understand he's worried but i would have thought he'd be more subtle than that.
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From FairyBean on October 02, 2012
Aww this chapter was cute as a button. And yaaaay to Harry getting some kick ass verbal on Daphne.
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From disgruntledfairy on October 01, 2012
Happy are the days that you update! I wasn't sure what to expect from the dance scene, but it was spectacular! I'm a terrible dancer so I can definitely commiserate with Harry. You definitely conveyed how awkward it is to dance when you don't have a clue. Thank you for accurately portraying the dexterously challenged! I liked the verbal sparring with Daphne Greengrass as well. Looking forward as always to your next update!
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From ANON - delia cerrano on October 01, 2012
I'm glad the marriage ceremony is over & the reception, I guess you would call it, over also. Now maybe we can see them getting to know the real them & start getting closer...turn the demi marriage into a real marriage. And what was that remark of Daphane about? Is she planning on getting it on with one of them?
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From bloodshound on September 30, 2012
*makes a face. Har is better at action based miracles but this chappie shows at least that he can and is willing to learn. Maybe next time Draco will think to give him a bit of warning and schooling before dumping him in at the deep end, though the impromptu dance lessons did rescue the evening for them.
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