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Reviews for The Name I'll Give to Thee

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From moodysavage on September 11, 2012
    that lotion scene was sexy as all get out... especially because neither of them was trying to be sexy.
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  • From Christopher11 on September 11, 2012
    I'm sorry, but this story does just not make sense. Harry and the others did the ritual to save the ENTIRE world from the Dementor Ghosts. In that case, if I was Harry, I would tell Malfoy "Hey, I will help pay for your mother to recover. I will buy you a new wand. I'll even pay you X dollars for your misery. However, marrying into your family? FUCK NO! Go screw yourself!"

    I have a strong conscience but even I wouldn't agree to this insanity and neither, by the Harry in books, would Harry Potter. Just too OoC.
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  • From ANON - js on September 11, 2012
    Wow, that last lotion sounds really decadent. It's amazing how intimate it sounds without either of them doing very much.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 10, 2012
    Harry & Draco are going to get together & have a real married life I hope? Ilove them as a couple so much. They are such a contrast to each other - perfect as they learn that they care more than they knew & have many shared qualities, needs & habits.
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  • From ANON - Nightlo on September 10, 2012
    Such diverse ideas of family certainly bring conflicts, there would be no 'conquer' over brothers/lovers...Draco really has lots to learn about Harry
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  • From disgruntledfairy on September 08, 2012
    Hooray for another chapter! Thanks :)
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  • From ANON - polka dot on September 08, 2012
    OK looking different would totally suck. Who wants to be pointy?
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  • From bloodshound on September 08, 2012
    that has got to be one of the most dramatic demi marriages ever! Keep with that idea draco, har has never done well with being conquered... alliance now, that's a whole different story. What happened to the serpent peacock? Crispy critter?
    It will be interesting to see how his already connected ness to malfoy alters the general ceremony out look.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 08, 2012
    Oh Draco! You are in for one hell of a ride!!!
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  • From SParker on September 08, 2012
    about #5...

    1. LOL...I loved the title of the chapter, maybe you should do
    'The Demi-demi & a half Marriage' as a joke. :-)

    2. Cousin-husband...man I thought I've read it all, but apparently
    there is always something new under the sun & why isn't Harry's height
    affected, shouldn't he be taller or is he?
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  • From ANON - js on September 08, 2012
    I like the idea of Draco trying to go for an alliance with Harry better than Draco trying to conquer him.
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  • From ANON - Nightlo on September 07, 2012
    Finally find the time to clear 3 chapters...it seems a bigger plot is running, really cannot imagine the possible outcomes / reaction of public once Harry becomes a Malfoy is no longer a secret...
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  • From disgruntledfairy on September 06, 2012
    Love your story! Little details you include like about the rooms Harry's afraid of, Ollivander's dislike for Draco, etc., really make the story. The scene I'm looking forward to the most will be the adoption/marriage ritual. So many possibilities... I will be looking forward to the dragon battle in the next chapter so until then :)
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  • From SParker on September 05, 2012
    about #3..

    A dragon?!? O_o
    That was unexpected.
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  • From bloodshound on September 04, 2012
    I think... unless the ceremony alters him a great deal, that har isn't going to be so door matt ish after all. He's going to do his best to get along with them and repair things for them but he is too entirely used to being practical to become overly airified by the Malfoy name.
    draco isn't quite so accustomed to practicality but, i think with har around, he'll have to adjust.
    Even he can see Har is doing his best for them.

    That's one worrying wand. I wonder when draco will stop worrying about having to one up har
    oh, bloody hell. a dragon?! well, damn, i hope your temp wards are good har... seriously.
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