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By : Lomonaaeren

From LadyHemlock27 on January 18, 2013
Thanks for writing this! Its a wonderful story and I can't wait for the next bit of it. Seeing all of these different relationships melt together ands change people is really brilliant. Of course the romance is nice too. But the plots and structure really set your stories apart.
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From ANON - SP777 on January 17, 2013
about #25...

Hah! It's almost like sweet revenge! So, WHAT is she going to do now that
she is like the others. :-)

...and I'm curious have you thought of how the ritual is going to go between
H & D when you decide to do what the Mumms have done? Because at this point
I'm curious.

..AND I liked that sorta semi-story Harry told Draco about Tonks, though you would
think he would have a bit more to add.
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From Sasunarufan13 on January 17, 2013
Oh thank god she didn't manage to escape. Mind, I still would have enjoyed the story - you have a way of inserting little twists in your stories that make them even more fascinating to read - but meh, it's probably my dislike of Andromeda showing true LOL

It's nice to read how Draco is at least trying to be a bit nicer, even if he wants to gain something through it - his Slytherin side taking over I presume.
I still think Harry forgave Andromeda a bit too quickly, but he is more of a forgiving nature (shown by the times he forgave Ron when he abandoned him) so I guess that's natural.

And Andromeda's new power is interesting. So if I understood it right, she basically can create a space to hide in whenever she wants now?

Anyway, as always a great chapter! Looking forward to the next one :)
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From ANON - SP777 on January 06, 2013
#24..

..and she does a cliffhanger, just as it gets to the good part.
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From Sasunarufan13 on January 06, 2013
Alright, I think this cliffhanger is worse than the last one LOL They probably should have seen that move coming, but I suppose they hadn't expected it of her. Can't Harry just pick Teddy up with his winds or so while Draco makes his claws longer (I think he can do that, no? If I remember correctly anyway) to stop Andromeda? I thought that was the first thing Harry would do, picking up Teddy with his winds. Or he could blast Andromeda back I suppose.

Anyway like always a great chapter :) Your chapters remind me every time of why you're one of my most favourite authors here and on fanfiction
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From bloodshound on January 03, 2013
well bugger. that was down right stupid of her. i mean seriously. does she think she can survive alone? not to mention har came to this world FOR teddy. har's not going to just let that lay. yeah, she's toast.
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From undeademopixi on January 02, 2013
.... holy shit. Can we kill her. I think that was the first time I have really hated a character in this story. Remus and Tonks died to protect their friends, who are all right there! Please please please tell me they catch her before she tries to go back through the gate?!
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From Sasunarufan13 on January 01, 2013
Oh wow. Now Andromeda has done it for real. I really wonder how Harry is going to react when he discovers her disappearance. Honestly, Andromeda annoys me a little. I hope Harry will take her down a few pecks if he manages to find her - or if she returns.
I think this is the first time (well of all your stories I read anyway) where you really left it hanging at a sort of cliffhanger. I both like and dislike it LOL But I'm guilty of using cliffhangers a lot in my stories so I suppose I have no right complaining LOL XD
Very curious to the next update :D
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From ANON - libra_love on December 30, 2012
I absolutely love your writing! I just spent hours reading Reap the Hurricane and then this and I've read some of your other work as well... though I admit that I tend to avoid it during my school year because of the amount of time it takes me to read it if I get caught up in it... and I will get caught up. Anyway, I don't usually read your stuff on aff, but I thought I'd leave a review here anyway. Great job! I love the created world and the depth that you give even to your minor characters. I like your descriptions of Teddy, Andromeda, and Ginny. You have the ability to make characters not just likable but realistic in a way that the reader has to make up their own mind as to whether they like a character or not because the intended reaction is not expicit in the writing - I hope that made sense. One question though: in everything I can remember reading from you, when you write Harry and Draco in intimate scenes it tends to be with top!Draco (for a lack of better description) and I was wondering if this was just your preference or if maybe there is a reason (in this fic or others) that I just haven't gotten. I freely admit that I prefer to read it the other way, or at least read it with more versatility and sometimes it does stop me from continuing (though your plots are more than intriguing enough to encourage me to continue). Anyway, I've clearly been up far to late and should probably try to get something that at least resembles sleep tonight, but I wanted to review since I went so many chapters without it, and tell you how much I'm enjoying this work and how much I admire you as a devoted author in general. Can't wait to read more!!!
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From bloodshound on December 24, 2012
hmmm, well, a truce of a sort is better than nothing yeah?
that was a close one... still, draco didn't enjoy his time as a voldi minion so i doubt he'd enjoy being bodiless's. besides, what good is power if you can only direct it at another beings say so?
hmmm, so bodiless isn't used to dealing with pair bonded beings, who are both individual and coupled at the same time. fascinating.

heee, i picked it without reading the next chappie first. still, it would explain a lot. bonds are NEEDED as a defense against bodiless. i wonder how many poor, unprepared earthling saps bodiless has nommed. they'd so be easy meat.
lol, bodiless really does NOT want to call ron to it. not if he's a null wild magic wizard/ magician type person. the idea that their concentrated desire is what triggers their particular gift is most interesting. i hope that gets explored a bit more.
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From ANON - SP777 on December 22, 2012
about #22...

I wish I could draw well, because I would definitely do the scene where Hermione
is glaring & Draco is sitting all smug with that "Eternal Smirk' of his. :-)

Anyway, yeah! That idea about the bond hit me when Harry was fighting that Huge Puff
of Air to get to Draco..and when I think about it, that was the biggest hint you gave
us. If no one else got it, oh well...

I kinda figured that was the issue with Ginevra & her bird, but you explained it already.

I have to say it, but I wish this and Reign of Silence were the only 2 stories you were
doing so we could get up dates every 3 days. :-)

..and it's good to see Ron 'hanging with the big boys' now.
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From undeademopixi on December 18, 2012
Wow, that was beautiful. Here again love is stronger than a malicious force. I am so curious about the riders! Can't wait for more!
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From ANON - SP777 on December 16, 2012
about #21..

First of all, I want to squeal like a girl, but I won't...

Second of all, I want to leap up & down in glee like an insane
jackrabbit when Harry rushed to Draco's rescue, but I ain't...

Third of all, I want to say that was some DAMN good s*** to read,
the best excitement thus far, but I'm not going to...

Fourth of all, I want to say I'm guessing that's why the mumm's act
in pairs, because of an ingrained survival instinct against a force that
is stronger than them & they fight better as a unit, but I shan't..

I'm just going to calmly walk away and say...good job. ;-)
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From ANON - SP777 on December 16, 2012
about #21..

First of all, I want to squeal like a girl, but I won't...

Second of all, I want to leap up & down in glee like an insane
jackrabbit when Harry rushed to Draco's rescue, but I ain't...

Third of all, I want to say that was some DAMN good s*** to read,
the best excitement thus far, but I'm not going to...

Fourth of all, I want to say I'm guessing that's why the mumm's act
in pairs, because of an ingrained survival instinct against a force that
is stronger than them & they fight better in pairs, but I shan't..

I'm just going to calmly walk away and say...good job. ;-)
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From ANON - SP777 on December 09, 2012
about #20...

I was thinking..what would you call a tribe like that? I was playing with
the word Avians. Well it DOES fit.

Anyway, yes Harry almost screwed up, 'eager beaver' is his middle name, but
when you think about it, he is not used to sitting still, he really needs the
action in his life. I say let him have it, within reason. Of course, that's
where Draco comes in...his balance & to make sure he doesn't overdo it.

Anyway, that was a good chapter...and nice job on the action. Who knows maybe
we'll get a Quidditch story out of you soon. :-)
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