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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on March 11, 2013
    about the end..

    I get a weird feeling for HArry, regarding what happened to him
    AND I can't wait to see how u do this child bearing thing. Should
    be interesting.

    But I'm glad they found their place in the world finally...all of them
    for now.

    Other than that, this was a WONDERFUL sequel, with its adventures and different
    Hurricane habitants.
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  • From Sasunarufan13 on March 11, 2013
    A very nice ending to this interesting story. It was also interesting to read that Harry received Bodiless' power now - at first I feared Hermione would tell them that Harry had acquired some sort of illness that would lead to him being paralyzed or so (don't ask me how I came up with that farfetched thought - sometimes I don't know how my brain works) so I'm glad it was something entirely else.

    I'm curious to the next installment and will definitely read that one as well :) Will it be a long oneshot (like you sometimes have done to other stories), a short story or a long story? Just curious :) Anyway, looking forward to the sequel of this!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 09, 2013
    about #30...

    1. How is that Andromeda is...slime??? O_o

    2. I really liked how you described ''Ginny. Charlie. George. Angelina. Percy..and
    the others'' when they were bonded through Harry & Draco. It gave the feeling that
    for a moment ALL of them were a unit, with no misunderstandings or strife between them.
    Oh, and to read that Harry 'sang'...wish he would do it regularly. Now that's a story
    idea you haven't explored.

    ...and lastly, I gotta say that was one HELL of an ending. :-)
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  • From Sasunarufan13 on March 02, 2013
    *blinks* *clears throat* I kind of had forgotten that Percy had come with them *sheepishly smiles* Sorry, that had nothing to do with your writing skills, I just didn't remember him for a moment. My fault.

    Does the ending of this chapter mean that Bodiless is defeated? Or did it just retreat to gain its strength back?

    Anyway, as always a great chapter :D
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  • From LadyHemlock27 on March 02, 2013
    ooo I just love this story! And it just gets better. Thanks so much.
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  • From Sasunarufan13 on February 22, 2013
    I'm glad Harry finally told Bill what he thinks of his constant doubt of him. It was time he finally told him off - like Harry said, it's his choice if he comes with them, but he shouldn't complain about every little thing that happens.

    Hermione annoys me a bit with her constant need for being everywhere where something interesting is happening, but she's fine in general.
    I do wonder what is going to happen now though.
    Great chapter!
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  • From SParker on February 21, 2013
    about #29...

    1. I know I've asked this...but I'm drawing a blank here. The Mumm's...do they have the
    appearance of a ram? Because I keep picturing them as sheep and that doesn't really
    seem to do them justice or give them a powerful enough appearance, considering what they
    can do.

    2. Do the Mumms fight? Have a hard time seeing that of them, unless they have powerful hooves.
    [does it bother you that I say Mumms, let me know]

    3. Whu'!!??!! You mean that Nasty Puff of Wind 'that ain't got no body' is trying to pick a fight with them?
    Oh the arrogance!

    Kinda makes me wonder if there's more to That Nasty Puff of Wind that you aren't telling, it could be a creature
    for all we know...
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  • From SParker on February 11, 2013
    about #28..

    Wow, I think we actually had a chapter where Harry & Draco actually didn't
    have to do anything, just sit back & wait to see if the fireworks would happen.

    1. Where did you get the inspiration to do that scene between the riders & the
    mummidades [I finally spelled their name right] meeting each other in the air?
    It was different.

    2. I agree with Draco 'Darkness in the North' does sound cooler than Bodiless. :-/

    All in all, not much happened here, but it was still interesting.
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  • From Sasunarufan13 on February 10, 2013
    Seems that for once Harry is the patient one and Draco the impatient one. XD
    At least they made a connection - that's something I guess. Now it's waiting for the decision of the one party.
    Like always, a very interesting chapter ^^ And hey, Draco for once didn't mention children LOL
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 03, 2013
    about @27...

    1. Damn, I'm not even in the story with them and I got frustrated
    trying to figure out ''wha tha' hell are they trying to say?'' :-)

    2. So, they're off to travel to Oval Valley and is it just me or is
    Draco getting that sure of himself that this baby creation is SURELY
    going to happen without thinking that there might be problems? It would
    be ironic if he wound up carrying because something went haywire. :-)

    But, it would be nice to ''see'' if their creation comes from some type of dance.
    Have you thought of how you're going to do it?
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  • From bloodshound on February 03, 2013
    tch. i keep missing your up dates.
    draco does seem like decent dad material.
    u know, for an alliance, har's mob don't seem to be getting much out of this beyond being the mummi's trouble shooters... tho knowing what those ovals do is a useful bit of knowledge.
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  • From Sasunarufan13 on February 03, 2013
    So the Mummidade originally used those ovals as transport until Bodiless made them disappear? Interesting.

    I find the names you come up with fascinating as well - as someone who always has trouble coming up with original names and even original spells, I'm jealous of the way you can come up with different names all the time. At the same time I do admire you for that.

    Like always it was interesting to read!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 29, 2013
    about #26...

    You know, it's good to know that with all the craziness, the changes,
    & the drama, Draco will NEVER change, if he can help it. :-)
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  • From Sasunarufan13 on January 29, 2013
    I find it a bit funny how Hermione and Draco seem to agree on the subject of Andromeda and Harry forgiving her for pulling a stunt like that. Never thought they would one day agree with each other on something.

    It's also interesting to see how set Draco is on having a child together - usually in other stories it's Harry who's more open to the idea of children and not Draco (though I have to admit that I made a story where Draco is also more set on it than Harry but I suppose stories like those are in the minority). It seems Harry has giving up at the moment on trying to convince Draco to not pursue the thought of children - he probably considers it a pointless argument at this point LOL

    I'm curious as to why they need to go to that place, but I assume that will be explained in the next chapter.

    As always a great chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on January 19, 2013
    now that was really stupid of her. She had to have know har wasn't just going to let that slide. and to try and go back through the gate when she didn't know if they could or not is just suicidal.

    most interesting. i wonder how long it takes before return is not an option. if they've adapted, does that mean they aren't strictly human anymore. talent built on the first driving desire a person has... i wonder what teddy's was?
    no way she can deny it now, poor old girl.
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