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Reviews for No Obvious Truths

By : Danyealle
  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2013
    even though I don't like super long fics. I am enjoying yours very much. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Kaya on September 09, 2013
    I love it I cannot wait for the next chapter who will babe that fake dark lord
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on September 05, 2013
    It took me two days to read this but I did it. Excellent update!
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  • From Jan on September 05, 2013
    And the plot starts thickening, can't wit o see what's going to happen next, please update chapter 23 soon ^_^

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  • From Mashkai30 on September 04, 2013
    Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ladilyndi on September 04, 2013
    One of my favorites. Good chapter as always. I had thought that it might be difficult to keep the factions separate but you make it quite easy. I'm also glad that they are going to let Lupin write Harry.
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  • From demonsangel on September 03, 2013
    Great chapter, a welcome relief after 12 hours of school.
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  • From Kain on September 03, 2013
    Nice chapter, and yay a Hermione mention.
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  • From ANON - ranni on September 03, 2013
    Great new chapter. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From devilsmomma on August 29, 2013
    Love this story and the direction it is taking. Keep up the good work. Could you please let me of updates at onecent1960@hotmail.com

    thanks
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  • From ANON - GoddessonmyKnees on August 29, 2013
    Great chapter. I hope that Remus sides with Harry. While Dumbles doesn't seem completely evil anymore I still really don't like him.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From terrilee on August 22, 2013
    love it. been hooked on this update more soon

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  • From ANON - L on August 22, 2013
    Yay! Remus is on board! So, there's that. I still enjoy the overall tone you have going and I am glad that Dumbles is feeling like a douche for how he treated the Harry being sick situation, but I am just waiting at this point for something to happen.

    At the beginning of this story, you had a lot going on, Harry's illness, Figg getting Snape, the Malfoy's taking Harry in, Tom not being Voldepoo, the Draco/Harry friendship, etc. But, for the last few chapters, there hasn't really been any plot development. Just the same thing, Harry is sick, people are nice to him, maybe have to explain things to a new person... that is it. Time seems to be moving slowly, and you seem to be trying to fill it up with Harry needing new potions and Remus being told (sort of) what is going on.

    But, there really isn't any tension anymore. Yes, Harry is sick, but he will be okay. He, and us as readers, are being shielded from anything the bad "Voldemort" is doing, or anything with sort of danger or excitement.

    So, we are just reading what happens in the day of a life of Harry, as he sits around not feeling good and taking potions. Maybe a small break for someone to be given an quick once over the plot of what has already happened. And, that's it.

    I think as this point, you need to add some tension, something to keep readers on their toes! Maybe a time-jump, where Harry is feeling better and therefore can learn more about the magic world, maybe get to explore Hogwarts a bit with the boys. Possibly look into the emotions that Tom and Lucius are feeling about finding their soul mate and him being so young and sick.

    I do like this story, I just think you've hit lull and need to knock the story of it!

    I wish you all the best and I can't wait to see where this story goes next!
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  • From ANON - ranni on August 22, 2013
    Fantastic new chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on August 21, 2013
    ch21: Great chapter. Hope everyone continues to keep Albus in the dark. I'd love to let Remus see Harry eventually.
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