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Reviews for The Principle of Sympathy

By : heerayni
  • From Bibliophile_Love on August 03, 2014
    I just spent thirty minutes searching for this story, hoping that in the year that has passed since I read it, it would have been completed. Please... Finish this. I would really love to read the entire work. Please.
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  • From ANON - Bibliophile on December 04, 2013
    I had quite a bit to say about this story, but as I am finishing it on my iPad and having to type this review with two fingers, I'm afraid I'm going to have to keep it short.

    Your writing is beautiful, and other than a few grammatical errors that even the best of us can't seem to escape, it is an engaging and thrilling read. This is by far the best HP Fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure of stumbling across. Not only is your writing fluid and the perfect mixture of quick wit and articulate artistry, but the meat of your story has depth as well. There is an actual STORY here to be told, and instead of getting right into the good stuff, you make us sweat a little. You also have an amazing talent of being able to get INTO the mind of the character, especially Draco. Really, it's beautiful.

    I was just devastated to realize that it is in fact, incomplete. Please do not abandon this piece. I am very much looking forward to finishing this. You're doing an excellent job and you are quite talented. I am a writer as well, and if you ever get bogged down or uninspired, feel free to email me and have a chat. I'd gladly give you a polite nudge, if you ever need one.
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  • From alexkdp on February 17, 2013
    ohmy dear draco. poor thing. so sensitive. so vulnerable. i loved that. i loved the quickie in the powder room but i loved more how that one kiss made all fade all in comparison. i loved how harry realised he was being a douchebag when he laughed. At least he realized it though I am very grateful for that. to save harry's life eh. looks like harry will love draco even more now! positively adored this latest chapter. i also liked ginny - the topper?! hahahaha. awesome. and omg whos that imposter?! and apologies for not reviewing the last chapter - i have been so busy with things. this will change - i am yours in the next update. great job in writing the last two chappies. just the right amount of smut without overdoing it and the emotion...! it has me heart pulling in all directions! oh my poor heart. but it was amazing - all the emotion it invoked! omg.

    keep it up and am looking forward to the next one.
    all my love to my favourite author
    x
    alex
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  • From ANON - Pilpols on February 16, 2013
    poor Harry
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  • From ANON - Pilpols on February 15, 2013
    This is the most intense chapter and I completely love it!
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  • From ANON - Pilpols on February 15, 2013
    OMG THIS IS SO COOL!
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  • From ANON - BlackPage on February 13, 2013
    This is so.... I don't even have the words... it just draws you in and then you'd be needing more. Wonderful update as always. Will be waiting for the next installment
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  • From SParker on February 11, 2013
    about #19..

    What started out as an introspective chapter, turned into a chapter
    that had some revelations for Harry.

    It's always good to see a Harry that shows some restraint, but is also quick in
    the uptake...at this point in his life he would have to be, especially being an
    Auror. I, also, hope to see him take his revelation on what he thought on Draco
    and act on it....by LISTENING & getting to know him. :-)

    Also, I'm going to pass on being on the email list. It's something I've never done, I
    would just rather wait on the update as they come. Besides I have like 5 stories I'm trying
    to read at the same time, which is crazy to me sometimes. *__*

    So, trust me, I got plenty to distract me while I wait... :-)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 10, 2013
    Whew! They ended up together & smiling! Annnd Harry found out a tiny bit about Draco (Egil & Eric relationship & Eric's wish for Draco which Draco doesn't want Plus what Eric wants him to do).
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 31, 2013
    about #18..

    Aww...I feel sorry for Draco for feeling a bit slighted from Harry, but
    he must understand deep down that it IS kind of farfetched " Draco Malfoy...a
    necromancer?? Yeah, right!"

    Anyway, I hope he tells Harry his feelings because nothing good comes out of
    misunderstandings...and I hope he tells the truth soon.

    Nice scene with Ginny there, though I never did care for her in the books/movies.
    I swear it was SO cliched to have Harry marry her of all people. I still feel Hermione
    was the better choice, who says any of the redheads had to marry in the first place.

    ..anyway back on track..

    I'm going to have to reread the history on the Brothers one more time to cement it into
    my head, but you did a good job putting it together. Also, your characterization of Draco is
    perfect. His serious, mysterious persona, mixed with the dry humor is perfect for someone who
    became what he is now. Though 2 chapters ago, it seems like he had reverted back to the childish
    sixteen year old Draco, during the...charity ball?

    All in all, you're doing good with such a complex story.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 30, 2013
    I hads to read it twice & went back to the last chapter & AN's but I'm all caught up & understand it...more or less. Ready for the next. Don't like that Draco is still keeping things from Harry. That can only fester & spoil their new & tentative relationship when he finds out.
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  • From alexkdp on January 24, 2013
    oooo! cliffy! oh you meanie youuuu. hahaha. the seem so in sync and i think thats amazing. it certainly helps that you write so good too!
    very good chapter. i like how you didnt overdo the smut scenes! people tend to get too carried away and too graphic and at times they may be but usually its too much. i liked how you were very subtle with them and didnt go overboard with the entire thing and it was just right - not too little to disappoint either!
    Refreshing. a change of pace from any other full blown smut scene ive ever read. and thats a good thing.
    i see the excitement coming up. waiting for you to keep your word - to post the following week!
    read ya next week!
    till then, all my love,
    your favourite stalker.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 19, 2013
    about #17...

    Oh, I just KNOW you're going to explain about the flashback in the very near [immediate] future & was
    that real for Harry, his connection to Draco? :-)

    Wonderful love scene you did, it wasn't over the top AND Harry's reflection was a 'true feel good moment'.

    By the way, is the next chapter where we see Draco doing some serious kickass...and finding out the 'D'plan?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 18, 2013
    Such love between them! And so much they need to say and questions to answer. I hope they know...feel... the love they have for each other so that the talking doesn't cause pain but understanding and an even deeper love. Besides, I don't think I could take it if they separated now...no matter what silly self sacrificing reason they make up or how temporary they say it will be. All these chapters led up to such intense feelings on their behalf...nope couldn't take it and neither can they. They told me so.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 31, 2012
    about #16

    I have finally caught up and it's ALL good! :-]

    I've seen your story and wasn't sure what to make of it from
    the summary alone. But I gave it a chance & liked how you started
    it to the ''it's about time" moment between Harry & Draco.

    The idea of Draco being what he is, it is hardly ever done here, so
    I really hope to see the end of this journey and not get halfway there,
    only to run out of gas, if you get my meaning.

    I see that a lot with ambitious plotlines.

    I have to ask, will we see more of Tenebra...and the others from the Underworld?
    Will we see just what it is Draco can do? Because I am curious. Other than that you have
    yourself an interesting body of work here.

    Looking forward to seeing what else you have for us.
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