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Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 14, 2013
    Nice usage on the canon story. I felt badly for all involved all over again. And, I liked Severus and Hermione just needing to be together in the silence. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From demonsangel on April 14, 2013
    Cute chapter.
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on April 13, 2013
    First off I hope you're feeling better! Hurt wrist and all this story becomes more amazing with each chapter. I felt bad for Ron, I wanted to smack Lavender and shake Dumbledore!! But my favorite moment was the end!! These two love each other something fierce! I know nothing has been said but actions really do speak louder than words. That small moment of true intimacy was so heart felt and moving it made my own heart skip a beat! I really do adore this tale and as always I can't wait for more! Take care of yourself!
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  • From ANON - Missycam on April 13, 2013
    Wow! Thank you for all your efforts
    I love the chapter's ending
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  • From ANON - Kim on April 13, 2013
    I was enjoying this story for quite a while. But I'm going to be honest here - I'm not really liking Hermione all that much. It's clear she doesn't respect Harry, or even seem to like him much. She considers Ron her best friend, but has no consideration as to the girlfriend of her 'best friend' when he's been hit with a love potion and a poison. She's upset that Harry is using a used potion text to his benefit, all the while she's shagging the professor who's margin notes Harry's benefiting from. To be frank, Hermione's actions and statements in Book 6 in canon put me off; perhaps now that the focus is solely on her, the personality traits she exhibited in canon are more evident, thus putting me off further. I do think she's well suited for Sev, though. Both are intelligent, sneaky, snarky about peers, and hold others to low expectations and even less respect. A perfect match.

    I think your story is very well written, and engaging. It's just Hermione's thoughts that have turned me off some. I'm not sure if I will continue through to the end, but I do wish you luck.
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  • From ANON - Faith on April 11, 2013
    I love this story :) and I've read thru it like 5 times :) haha I hope you are able to update soon and I hope you hand starts to feel better
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  • From StarFire on April 02, 2013
    Love! This was another wonderful chapter! Thank you for updating, but please becareful with your wrist.. As much as I want you to update, I dont want you to further injury it.. Keep up the good work and can't wait for more.. xoxo
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  • From DB1 on April 01, 2013
    @32 loving this. Update soon
    DB
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  • From demonsangel on March 31, 2013
    I like this chapter. Glad not everything is smut lol. Great job hun, can't wait to read more. Take it easy with your wrist though!
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on March 31, 2013
    Absolutely one of my all time favorite stories!!! I love this chapter and Snape's interaction with Crooks was funny and heartwarming. I love that Hermione's cat like Severus so much and I think deep down he does too. I love the way you've written both characters and I'm always so thrilled to see an update. I hope your wrist heals swiftly and your feeling better soon!
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  • From ANON - Missycam on March 31, 2013
    Oh they're so cute....
    Thank you
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  • From DarkFlamingPhoenix on March 27, 2013
    I'm sorry if your reviews have been dropping! I'm notoriously bad at leaving reviews (or I would be notorious if anyone knew me). But I always check for your updates every week or two; this is one of my favourite stories of all time. I absolutely love both Snape and Hermione in this, and I'm very happy that there's plot included with all of this. Keep up the great work! :3
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  • From ANON - megnutz on March 22, 2013
    Awww :) as much as I luv the smutty stuff , and lets face it who doesn't?!?!? I do adore the tender moments as well,especially when it's snapes musings ! Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - KisaKnox on March 21, 2013
    I always get so excited when another week has passed. It means I get to read a new chapter. It's wonderfully written and I cannot wait for the next update. ^_^
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 20, 2013
    Too sad that people are so stupid sometimes. How traumatic for the child. Sigh... I am glad they got some time together for V-Day and that he was more than content to cuddle with her. It was actually very sweet. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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